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"..repairing the coarse military approach to personal differences." In the first sentence, is coarse the word to use here?

In the beginning of the last sentence replace as with currently.

"As, the United States Army advocated for the expansion of spoken language other than English within its armed forces personnel in order to attain a strategic military advantage." take out "As"

"The proposal of the ideology that would eventually found the United States Army’s Equal Opportunity (EO) program was first introduced in 1973 via the Civil Service Commission." Make it more straight forward maybe, hard to follow.

Over all very well written, informational and unbiased. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bjones9 (talk • contribs) 23:19, 21 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I have not been able to find the source of the origin of the Army EO Program.. seems that it is just a series of programs designed to stop discrimination. There is no date associated with its creation

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