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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by ECURBEC (talk | contribs) at 09:01, 2 July 2017. The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Constructive criticism is welcome.

09:41:48, 28 June 2017 review of submission by EleanorLC



I am unsure how to make it read less like a tour guide, I have received a lot of feedback through the tree house, and many people have helped me edit this page to make it acceptable. I had a look at the West Highland Way wikipedia page (a very similar walk), and I feel that this follows the safe structure and style of that page. Could you please provide me with more feedback so that I can edit this?EleanorLC (talk) 09:41, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This leg of the route rated medium level difficulty and things like that, belong in a tour guide, not in Wikipedia. Regards, » Shadowowl | talk 14:47, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
I have removed the mention of difficult ratings, would this be sufficient to resubmit or are their other things I should change? EleanorLC (talk) 13:27, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
It is fine now, feel free to resubmit. Regards, » Shadowowl | talk 16:09, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

11:57:17, 28 June 2017 review of submission by Aamkaped


Have added links to newspapers and other third party sources, please do take a look Aamkaped (talk) 11:57, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

There are some citation errors, and please remove the L-Sep character at External Links (image) -- » Shadowowl | talk 14:52, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 10:04:16, 29 June 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by Coxnix


Hello Admin :) I would like to know more details about the declined AfC Darft:Sanjana Jon

cosnis 10:04, 29 June 2017 (UTC)

Hello. At first, I am not an admin. I used the wrong decline reason there. The correct one should be that the section Early Life is not sourced. Also there is an grey box in the text. Please remove it, as it will prevent reviewers from accepting your article. Regards, » Shadowowl | talk 16:12, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

02:04:22, 1 July 2017 review of submission by Camera museum



Hi I understand that face book is not a reliable source

How about the below links. Even straits times wrote about us

Thanks please check again

http://www.straitstimes.com/lifestyle/arts/the-big-picture

http://straatosphere.com/vintage-cameras-museum-singapore/

http://thehoneycombers.com/singapore/museums-in-singapore-vintage-cameras-museum-singapore-in-kampong-glam/

http://www.homeanddecor.com.sg/articles/97169-visit-newly-opened-vintage-camera-s-museum-kampong-glam

Request on 09:01:12, 2 July 2017 for assistance on AfC submission by ECURBEC


Hello! First thanks for taking the time to look at my article The 'How to do good' Philanthropy Programme. I have resubmitted it and I think I have taken out incorrect/inappropriate external links as well as making a few improvements (I hope). Is it possible for you to have another look? Or is this an inappropriate request? If so apologies in advance.ECURBEC (talk) 09:01, 2 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

ECURBEC (talk) 09:01, 2 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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