Talk:Big data ethics

Hi Rachel

I think you have a great start, but you still need to flesh some things out a bit more.

Firstly, i think your idea of describing the difference between small data and big data is a great starting point, but you need to make it flow less like an essay and more like a wikipedia article. Explaining it this way, in my opinion, would offer you a bit more of an encyclopedic tone to your article, which I think is lacking.

Your outline is essentially just the topics you want to cover and i will assume is not done, and I'm sure you'll be adding more to them. I think the topics you'll be looking to cover will flesh out these sections and make them stand out effectively. That being said, be careful how you approach them, seeing as this seemed a bit more like an essay in terms of structure than an article.

Finally, your sources are exactly what the article needs. I hope you'll be able to find everything you need from them.

Good luck with your article and have fun!

Warner Warnermcqueen (talk) 00:05, 9 November 2017 (UTC)

Big Data Ethics - Peer Review by Mo

I think you have a great start. I would suggest adding more to the lead in regards to what is data ethics, maybe by just simply linking another page which describes data ethics itself. In regard to the areas of work you will be going in to, I think you have a very solid foundation. Perhaps even look into some of the specific companies that abuse big data, and even how it plays a role in marketing. Youtube and Facebook ads likely come from data collection, so maybe look into the ethical side of how that data is collected. Overall, I think you have an awesome article coming along. Good luck!