User talk:Jessehersh/sandbox

Kevin's peer review

1. It introduced the novel in a very detailed way, including well-explained plots. it is very interesting that this page includes literary elements which impresses me and provokes my curiosity towards the book. 2. I think the most important change for this article is to add characters' names in plot section. The lack of names may cause indifferent feeling of readers. Because they would think "Ok, these are some random guys popping out everywhere." They would be one step away from entering the door of story; they would not be in the story. 3. I have learnt the simplicity of language from this article. As a Wikipedia article, simple and accurate language would be more efficient to express the article.