Talk:59th (Staffordshire) Infantry Division/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:29, 11 July 2019 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images properly licensed
• In what ways was a motor division weaker than a normal infantry division?

  I have expanded the sentence to further clarify.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• As a result of the evacuation, the division, proper, did not leave Britain. If it had been alerted to leave, you need to say so. Otherwise this sentence doesn't make sense

  I have reworded, does this work?EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• First World War vintage hyphen between War and vintage and here large scale attack and here first phase objectives

  Hyphens addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• 132nd Brigade, during the Battle of France remove the comma

  removedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• British 61st divisions capitalize divisions

  fixedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• The 59th Division supported comma after division

  addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• In more than one place, you haven't capitalized battalion, forex 5th battalion

  I believe I have added thisEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• following day, United States's First Army "the American" reads better

  AmendedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• Capitalize the first B in bailey bridge

  AmendedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)

• Link squadron--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:19, 31 July 2019 (UTC)

  Added link.

  Thanks once again for the reviewEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 17:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)