Talk:Emma Blackery/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hiya111 (talk · contribs) 20:45, 28 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Will be taking a look at this article..

Overall, the article is written in simple and clear English - this is fine. My other thoughts however..

What does "experimented with paid promotion" mean? Same goes for CC-BY licence (don't assume the reader knows what it is)
Make sure you link to/explain briefly an EP. Not everyone knows that it stands for "Extended Play"
"Blackery founded her second independent record label" - When did she ever start her first record label? There was no mention of a first.
Why is there an image from a Zelda video game? (I know she's a fan, but not sure that's relevant here)
Why is the track listing for the album Villains here?
I understand it doesn't need to be a long biography - but readers may want to know, perhaps, about her artistry, influence on the public, channel demographics etc.

Article looks stable and well-illustrated with images. In my view however, needs a bit more polishing to be a Good Article. Hiya111 (talk · contribs) 12:46, 29 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Lede fixed. The rest will take some time, for starters I missed the GA1, and nobody cared to mention that a Draft:Villains (Emma Blackery album) exists. –84.46.52.173 (talk) 22:26, 6 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]