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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
Will be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:58, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- Delink Canadian per MOS:OVERLINK
- Wikilink Peterborough Petes on the first mention in the lead
- Link scouts to Scout (sport) for those unfamiliar with the term
Youth
[edit]- Wikilink Peterborough Petes and minor hockey to the correct entries on their first mention in the prose
- "to allow him to be eligible to play with the Petes." - I think the words in bold are unneeded
- Wikilink Barrie to the relevant article
- Wikilink points to the appropriate article
Major junior
[edit]- "Dunn led all first year defencemen in the league in scoring with 33 points in 63 games." - Hockeys Future does not mention Dunn scored 33 points. Please find another to go along with Hockeys Future to verify that the information is correct
- "totaling 56 points in 68 games" - not mentioned by the Niagara IceDogs source attached to it. Please use another source that explicitly states this fact
- "where he remained pointless in the 6-0 loss to Team Orr." - please use an en dash in place of the hyphen
- "He also earned a final ranking of 32 overall" - 32nd
- "to help the team win the series 4-2." - en dash please
Professional
[edit]- "Approaching his second season as a pro," - professional
- "He consistently played on the teams" - team's
- "by once again cracking the Blues lineup to begin the 2018–19 season." - use another formal word instead of cracking
- Wikilink cross-checked for those unfamiliar with ice hockey terminology
- "Dunn recorded a new career high in 'points" - how many points?
- Wikilink Alex Pietrangelo and Colton Parayko
- "St. Louis' first Stanley Cup in their 52-year franchise history." - mykawartha.com doesn't mention it was St. Louis' first Stanley Cup win in its 52-year history but Peterborough Examiner. I suggest citation bundling
- "During the pause in play due to COVID-19," - due to the COVID-19 pandemic,
- "Dunn competed in a league wide" - league-wide
- Wikilink Fortnite
References
[edit]- It should be made consistent on whether it should be "The Peterborough Examiner" or "Peterborough Examiner"
- Reference 13 title: ""2014-15 Team Awards" - en dash please
- Reference 14 is missing the author
- Reference 22 should mention that The Canadian Press is the agency that provided the story
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 18:12, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96, thanks for the quick review. I believe I have addressed all of your issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 20:44, 27 May 2020 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. I've wikilinked two players who have articles. MWright96 (talk) 06:38, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96, my apologies. I was sure I Wikilinked them but my wifi was cutting in and out and often times I had to refresh. Thanks for the review once again. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 09:17, 28 May 2020 (UTC)
- @HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. I've wikilinked two players who have articles. MWright96 (talk) 06:38, 28 May 2020 (UTC)