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I'll review this tomorrow.<span style="white-space:nowrap; font-family:Harlow Solid Italic;"><span style="font-size:small; color:teal;"> « Gonzo fan2007</span> [[User talk:Gonzo_fan2007#top|<small style="color:#2A2722">(talk)</small>]] @ </span> 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC) |
I'll review this tomorrow.<span style="white-space:nowrap; font-family:Harlow Solid Italic;"><span style="font-size:small; color:teal;"> « Gonzo fan2007</span> [[User talk:Gonzo_fan2007#top|<small style="color:#2A2722">(talk)</small>]] @ </span> 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC) |
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===Comments=== |
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*I'm wondering if [[American football]] is necessary in the first sentence. Maybe {{tq|American equipment manager}}? Would get ride of the consecutive linking and add in his ethnicity. |
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*{{tq|Noel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin and while attending there enlisted in World War II at the age of 18.}} is a bit choppy. Maybe {{tq|Noel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin; while still in high school, he enlisted in World War II at the age of 18.}}? |
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*{{tq|and a "lot of smaller things" needed by the team for each game}} --> {{tq|and a "lot of smaller things" needed for each game}} |
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*{{tq|as well as 30 balls for games}} --> {{tq|as well as 30 game balls}} |
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*{{tq|11 head coaches}} you could link to [[List of Green Bay Packers head coaches]] |
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*{{tq|I don't know what in the hell I could've done more."[8]}} and {{tq|He served the team faithfully and well for a long time."[13]}} I think the period needs to go after the quotation mark |
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*For the image, you need to do a few things: change the link to be the non-Wikimedia Library link. Also, the copyright holder is the [[Green Bay Press-Gazette]] (the image caption notes "Press-Gazette Files". Lastly, add a caption to the infobox, something like "Noel working on a helmet in an undated photo". Also, the image needs to be downsized, which the bot will do at some point. |
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*Spot checks look good. Ref 6, 11 and 14 needs an access date (I typically do them for all citations, but I think you don't; I think thats ok for the Newspaper.com sources, but the others are just live web pages, and thus need access dates). |
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Looks good, putting on hold.<span style="white-space:nowrap; font-family:Harlow Solid Italic;"><span style="font-size:small; color:teal;"> « Gonzo fan2007</span> [[User talk:Gonzo_fan2007#top|<small style="color:#2A2722">(talk)</small>]] @ </span> 23:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC) |
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 22:49, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this tomorrow. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:54, 24 April 2024 (UTC)
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- I'm wondering if American football is necessary in the first sentence. Maybe
American equipment manager
? Would get ride of the consecutive linking and add in his ethnicity. Noel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin and while attending there enlisted in World War II at the age of 18.
is a bit choppy. MaybeNoel attended Central Catholic High School in Wisconsin; while still in high school, he enlisted in World War II at the age of 18.
?and a "lot of smaller things" needed by the team for each game
-->and a "lot of smaller things" needed for each game
as well as 30 balls for games
-->as well as 30 game balls
11 head coaches
you could link to List of Green Bay Packers head coachesI don't know what in the hell I could've done more."[8]
andHe served the team faithfully and well for a long time."[13]
I think the period needs to go after the quotation mark- For the image, you need to do a few things: change the link to be the non-Wikimedia Library link. Also, the copyright holder is the Green Bay Press-Gazette (the image caption notes "Press-Gazette Files". Lastly, add a caption to the infobox, something like "Noel working on a helmet in an undated photo". Also, the image needs to be downsized, which the bot will do at some point.
- Spot checks look good. Ref 6, 11 and 14 needs an access date (I typically do them for all citations, but I think you don't; I think thats ok for the Newspaper.com sources, but the others are just live web pages, and thus need access dates).
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:30, 25 April 2024 (UTC)