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*Could you provide a digital copy of source #2 please? (I might end up wanting digital copies of all online sources you provided, so be prepared). |
*Could you provide a digital copy of source #2 please? (I might end up wanting digital copies of all online sources you provided, so be prepared). |
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*I don't know what reference #3 shows for you, but I'm not seeing anything about Niedfield's father being {{tq|descended from German immigrants and converted from Lutheranism to Catholicism as a young man}}. All I'm seeing is a record of Niedfield's birth and death dates along with a listing of her parents. |
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*Ref #4 verifies that Joseph was a firefighter but does not verify that he served in the army during WWI. You're going to need to add another reference or remove it all together. |
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Nominator: Fortunaa (talk · contribs) 12:43, 6 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: HistoryTheorist (talk · contribs) 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
Hello! I look forward to reviewing this article. Depending on my schedule, a full review might not come until next weekend, but I hope to review this article in bits and pieces over the week. This review will focus on making original research issues and the other MOS details Airship mentioned, as I trust (but will verify) that the other aspects they checked remain up to GA standards. ❤HistoryTheorist❤ 02:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
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General comments
- Could you provide a digital copy of source #2 please? (I might end up wanting digital copies of all online sources you provided, so be prepared).
Early life and education
- I don't know what reference #3 shows for you, but I'm not seeing anything about Niedfield's father being
descended from German immigrants and converted from Lutheranism to Catholicism as a young man
. All I'm seeing is a record of Niedfield's birth and death dates along with a listing of her parents. - Ref #4 verifies that Joseph was a firefighter but does not verify that he served in the army during WWI. You're going to need to add another reference or remove it all together.