User:Ksuong2001/Küre Mountains National Park/Khascall Peer Review
General info
- Whose work are you reviewing?
(provide username)
- Link to draft you're reviewing
- Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi, due to the lack of peer reviews of your article you're getting one from me :).
Lead
See my notes about organization.
Content
I think you're most of the way there in terms of content but once you divide into sections you might see a few more opportunities to add to the content. Are there other historical notes to add? Recent events, news, or controversies?
Tone and Balance
You will want to edit this article for tone before you consider it complete. Check other articles on similar topics and the policies and tips I linked to in Discord if you need more ideas.
Sources and References
You're doing good work here, keep going!
Organization
I think it would make sense to split the article into sections -- after the lead, you could put in something like an environment section and a history section.
Images and Media
I left notes about this in canvas as well -- one other observation I want to make is that the images don't have any captions or other context. I don't know if this is something you're able to tackle, but to me it just seems strange to have it repeated the way it is in the main article, and I wonder if you have thoughts about how to make it better
Overall ImpressionsYou have made some great progress in your quest to advance this from a stub to a start. I know you got some other comments from me in canvas, so take a look at those as well.
Some examples and resources to look at: