User talk:Madrugada11/Wilbour Papyrus/Epichippo Peer Review

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This is an old revision of this page, as edited by Epichippo (talk | contribs) at 00:54, 4 March 2024 (→‎Clarity of Article Structure: new section). The present address (URL) is a permanent link to this revision, which may differ significantly from the current revision.

Lead Section

I am assuming since there were only changes to the Content and Purpose, there was no intentional change for the lead, and you are keeping the original article. Reading the original article, I do think maybe one thing could be expanded upon more. Would you consider writing a sentence or two that expands on the importance of the wilbour papyrus itself? Either than that, I don't think there's anything else that should be changed, it seems that it's all very straight to the point. Epichippo (talk) 00:53, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Clarity of Article Structure

I do believe the sections are organized well, I especially like how the Content & Purpose section is curated with the land and taxation/rent. I don't think anything should be changed in this aspect. Because there is not much information on this paper, and is relatively self-explanatory, I think it's very cut and dry. Epichippo (talk) 00:54, 4 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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