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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Taking this review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Lead

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  • How about wikilinking extra time, free kick and substitute to the relevant articles?

Route to the final

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  • "Championship top scorer Aleksandar Mitrović was unavailable for Fulham through injury." - what type of injury?
  • The term half time should be wikilinked
  • Wikilink aggregate to the relevant article on the first mention
  • The first mention of Swansea City is not wikilinked
  • "gave the home team a 1–0 which they held on to until the final whistle." - a 1–0 lead
  • "and was the last match to be hosted at the stadium before Brentford's move to a new stadium." - the name of the new stadium pleas

Background

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  • "they lost the 1997 Football League Second Division play-off Final 1–0 against Crewe Alexandra, the 2002 Football League Second Division play-off Final 2–0 against Stoke City, and the 2013 Football League One play-off Final 2–1 against Yeovil Town." - perphaps reduce the number of times the word "against" is used in this sentence
  • Perhaps state who broadcast the match and who was considered the favourites to win if the information is available?

First half

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Second half

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Extra time

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  • "On four mimnutes," - typo
  • "while Fulham's Ivan Cavaleiro was brought on by Fulham in place of Kamara." - repetition of "Fulham"
  • "In the 116th minute of the match," - the source and the details section say it was the 117th minute
  • Wikilink time-wasting to Running out the clock

Notes

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  • The note should be referenced to a reliable source

References

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  • Reference 15 is missing the publisher

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:32, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 all done bar those I've commented against above. Cheers, thanks very much for your review. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:56, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]