Talk:2020 EFL Championship play-off final/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
Taking this review for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 08:03, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- How about wikilinking extra time, free kick and substitute to the relevant articles?
Route to the final
[edit]- "Championship top scorer Aleksandar Mitrović was unavailable for Fulham through injury." - what type of injury?
- The term half time should be wikilinked
- Wikilink aggregate to the relevant article on the first mention
- The first mention of Swansea City is not wikilinked
- "gave the home team a 1–0 which they held on to until the final whistle." - a 1–0 lead
- "and was the last match to be hosted at the stadium before Brentford's move to a new stadium." - the name of the new stadium pleas
Background
[edit]- "they lost the 1997 Football League Second Division play-off Final 1–0 against Crewe Alexandra, the 2002 Football League Second Division play-off Final 2–0 against Stoke City, and the 2013 Football League One play-off Final 2–1 against Yeovil Town." - perphaps reduce the number of times the word "against" is used in this sentence
- Perhaps state who broadcast the match and who was considered the favourites to win if the information is available?
First half
[edit]- Wikilink penalty area
- Wikilink corner to the relevant article
- "caught a Fulham cross three minutes later," - which Fulham player caught the cross?
- It already says who caught it. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:04, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
Second half
[edit]- "Benrahma made a run into the penalty area and his cross was blocked" - blocked by whom?
- Not mentioned. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:05, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink set piece to Set piece (football)
- "Onomah then struck a shot over the Brentford's bar" - the text indiciated in bold is a typo
Extra time
[edit]- "On four mimnutes," - typo
- "while Fulham's Ivan Cavaleiro was brought on by Fulham in place of Kamara." - repetition of "Fulham"
- "In the 116th minute of the match," - the source and the details section say it was the 117th minute
- Wikilink time-wasting to Running out the clock
Notes
[edit]- The note should be referenced to a reliable source
References
[edit]- Reference 15 is missing the publisher
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 09:32, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done bar those I've commented against above. Cheers, thanks very much for your review. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:56, 8 October 2020 (UTC)
- MWright96 all done bar those I've commented against above. Cheers, thanks very much for your review. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 10:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)