Talk:Etna-class cruiser/GA1
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Reviewer: Skinny87 (talk) 15:26, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- 'For anti-torpedo boat defense the first three ships mounted five 57-millimeter (2.2 in) 6-pounder Hotchkiss guns' - What did the fourth carry? Is this linked to the third (small) paragraph in the Armament section? If so, this should be clarified.
- It is, and I've rephrased it.
- The third paragraph in the Armament should be merged into the previous or next paragraph given its small size.
- Done
- Did any of the ships do anything specific during the Boxer Rebellion?
- Nothing that I know about; they probably contributed landing parties, but that's just a guess.
- 'For anti-torpedo boat defense the first three ships mounted five 57-millimeter (2.2 in) 6-pounder Hotchkiss guns' - What did the fourth carry? Is this linked to the third (small) paragraph in the Armament section? If so, this should be clarified.
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
A few points to be clarified, and then this can be passed. Skinny87 (talk) 15:26, 10 October 2010 (UTC)
- Wow, you may yet run me out of GANs today! Greatly appreciated, though.
- I can but try :) Passing now. Skinny87 (talk) 16:47, 10 October 2010 (UTC)