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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:43, 30 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • by American singer RuPaul → you should specify that he's a drag queen, as well here
  • written by Joe Carrano and RuPaul → state "written by Joe Carrano and RuPaul" here for alternation
@Aoba47: OMG, I meant "written by Joe Carrano and the singer", sorry ;)
  • specifically "All Alone on Christmas" → specifically of "All Alone on Christmas"
  • negatively responded → other way round
  • of his VH1 talk show The RuPaul Show → when was this?

Infobox

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  • Only link "executive producer" once in the "Producer" row

Recording and release

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  • saying "You can hear us → saying, "You can hear us
  • a clear message; RuPaul explained: "Even the → a clear message, "Even
  • Rhino executive promoted → what does it mean to promote smth executive?
  • was made available on on October 28, 1997 → we only need one "on"

Composition

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  • "the fact that I'm doing it" → "the fact that [he is] doing it"
  • The final track is a remix of the "Celebrate" → "his" instead of "the"
  • I do not believe that is correct. This is the final track of the album; if you put "his final track" that is implying that it is RuPaul's final song ever, which is obviously not true as he released albums/songs after that and is still releasing music. Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • It peaked at number 31 on Billboard Dance Club Songs chart on October 11, 1997 and remained on the chart for a total of seven weeks.[13] → This isn't relevant in any sort of way here, so I would suggest removing it.
  • If you clicked on the link, you would notice that Billboard attributes the song to this album. I would imagine that commercial performance of a song would be relevant to the album in which the song appears. Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • Ken Veeder of The Advocate praised RuPual's → "RuPaul's" is written incorrectly
  • positivel responding → "positively" is written incorrectly
  • Melinda Newman referenced the album → Melinda Newman referenced the album to
  • "[m]akes me want to shove a candy cane in my eye" → "[m]akes [him] want to shove a candy cane in [her] eye"
  • Connect the third paragraph to the second one
  • Not done as these two paragraphs are discussing two completely different ideas. The second paragraph is about negative reviews while the third is about a more joke review. Aoba47 (talk) 17:23, 30 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Include the info about the commercial performance above in the "Charts" section

Track listing

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  • Corrected things here by myself

Personnel

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  • Change all "-"s to "–"

Track listing

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  • Fixed all alone here

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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  • 33.3% is still acceptable!
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References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article

Outcome

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'Passing this! YAY! Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:53, 30 April 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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