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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk) 12:10, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • How about changing the first sentence to "Kingsland Station is a rail station on the New Jersey Transit's Main Line." Could you also link to train station.
  • Please mention the country
  • "Ticket Vending Machines" is not a proper noun and therefore not capitalized.
  • "Kingsland Station" is a proper noun and should therefore be capitalized.
  • Wye needs to be wikilinked.
  • There is some sort of syntax error with "Bloomfield s".
  • "daym" is not a word
  • "November 28, 1916" should have a comma after it, similarly "October 27, 1963".
  • The "Erie–Lackawanna Railroad" uses an endahs, not a hyphen.
  • Perhaps I've just missed it, but when did NJT/NJDOT take over ownership of the line itself (not just the station and the operations)?
  • I don't understand what you mean by "an average of 440 of over 1,000 people".
  • I do not understand the context of the see also link. Without an explanation, the reader is left guessing why exactly that station is a see also link.

Placing on hold, Arsenikk (talk) 12:10, 2 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I got most of the stuff.I will get the rest when I go home via the main line :PMitch32(Transportation Historian) 21:13, 3 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
All done.Mitch32(Transportation Historian) 00:56, 6 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
And Mitch scores another good article :) Arsenikk (talk) 11:12, 6 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]