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GA Review

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The review comments (below) should be updated as the article is modified to address each comment. Truthanado (talk) 14:50, 7 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting

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For now I am placing the article on hold. While reviewing, I enountered some are minor formatting issues, and I have been able to fix them myself (they shouldn't be an obstacle to becoming a GA, but when taking an article to FAC, it's the kind of thing reviewers pick up on):

  • When using page or date ranges (eg: 1342–1370) use – (an ndash) instead of - (a hyphen).
  • Choose one style of date range and stick with it, eg: all 1342–1370 or 1342–70.

Content

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Content issues are more serious and something I cannot fix as I do not have the sources used in the article available to me. However, the article is in good shape and once the issues I raise are addressed I think the article will be easily up to GA standards.

I understand that there are some constraints on the information available due to the nature of the subject, but hopefully the majority of these issues can be addressed and I'll be checking back in a week. If the work is done by then, feel free to drop me a note on my talk page. I found the article to be well written and interesting, so to all the editors involved: keep up the good work. Nev1 (talk) 17:31, 6 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

A good effort Truthanado and Jonathan Oldenbuck, I'm impressed and happy to promote this article to GA and hope more castles get as far as GAN (I enjoy reviewing them ;-)) Nev1 (talk) 18:33, 9 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]