Talk:Parasite (2019 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: 3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk · contribs) 18:26, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
A very good article, but several issues need to be addressed and corrected in order for it to get promoted. The sections with issues are listed bellow.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 18:26, 14 September 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]References from no. 137 to 144 all have unformatted, "raw" url links. Sources no. 95, 96 as well. This needs to be properly formatted, like the rest of the references.
- References have been reformatted. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 13:14, 15 September 2020 (UTC)
Filming
[edit]"The director of photography for the film is Hong Kyung-pyo." No source at the end of this paragraph.
Music
[edit]"...the romanisation of names and nouns used are slightly different from those seen in the official English subtitles as translated by Darcy Paquet." The same issue, no source at the end of this paragraph.
Accolades
[edit]"being the third film to win both grand prizes after the former and The Lost Weekend." Again, no source at the end of this paragraph.
Critical response
[edit]This section just quotes the reviews verbatim. Quote after quote after quote. Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing. This needs to be summarized and editorized, with the examples being The Thing, Ghostbusters II and others.
- @3E1I5S8B9RF7: I have compacted the information presented in the section and have paraphrased a few quotes, which I think is sufficient enough to count as completed. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 00:19, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
Conclusion
[edit]Promoting the article, since the issues have been addressed.--3E1I5S8B9RF7 (talk) 08:57, 16 September 2020 (UTC)
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