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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 01:28, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


An interesting little read, I'll have some comments shortly. Courcelles (talk) 01:28, 21 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Publication date for ref 7 is wrong.
  • Ref 4; don't abbreviate newspapers' names
  • "it was covered by a number of media organizations worldwide." One article in Australia? Got any more citations for worldwide coverage?
  • What makes ref 12, a Wordpress blog, reliable?
  • "Worst Lawsuit Ever" is only in caps because it was part of the title of the article, we don't need to follow that here.
  • "After the decision, legal practitioners" One person's opinion, unless you've got other sources.
  • Still an issue, attribute the position, don't handwave towards multiple "legal practitioners" Or even better yet, lose this sentence which seems to be a fringe position of one man on a blog as the article stands. Courcelles (talk) 19:20, 25 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  • Both refs 15 and 16 have authors and publication dates available. Ref 10 has an author available.
  • Ref 2? Reliable or not?
  • Ref 14 is explicitly about postseason tickets. This was not a postseason game.