Talk:Sex, Love & Secrets/GA1
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 12:27, 5 May 2018 (UTC)
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Should you clarify in the infobox that the official website is an archived version?
- "from September 27, 2005 and October 18, 2005" - should this be "from September 27, 2005 to October 18, 2005"?
- Do you think it's important to list all the executive producers in the lead considering none of them are notable enough to have a Wikipedia article?
- I'd introduce John Kenneth Muir as a "critic"
- "while the official website references" - this seems an odd choice of word, why not just say 'states' instead of 'references'
- 'and lines include: "Be it Santa Claus, Twinkies, infidelity or murder, all humans keep secrets."' - I'm not sure if this adds anything to the article. It's a pretty silly thing to say; is that what you're trying to convey to the reader? That the narration wasn't very serious? Is this narration quote typical?
- "while using "clinical terms"" - any chance we can get an example?
- A thought to be dead boyfriend coming back into her life seems like a pretty big deal. Makes me want to know more about the circumstances. I understand it might be difficult to expand on this with brevity though
- "Preview videos were released on the official website for Sex, Love & Secrets" - I'd just say 'Preview videos were released on the shows official website'
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- Overall: