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Reviewer: Albacore (talk · contribs) 15:46, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review the article shortly. Albacore (talk) 15:46, 20 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Just to let you know, I will be away traveling from 24 March and I am uncertain both to the amount of time and access to Internet I will have, so it may be that it will be a fair amount of time before I can respond to feedback. Arsenikk (talk) 18:06, 23 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry for taking so long. Review:
  • Refs 2 5 and 8 need pp. instead of just p. since they're multiple pages
  • is a 5.8-kilometer (3.6 mi) long railway line between Stavne and Leangen in Trondheim, Norway. not sure "long" is needed here
  • Construction of the line started during the Second World War by the Wehrmacht might be worth a half sentence to note who the Wehrmact were.
  • and the 2.7-kilometer (1.7 mi) long long again not needed
  • The line then reaches Lerkendal Station, the only station on the line proper, which is located 2.55 kilometers I don't understand what you mean, "the only station on the line proper".
  • During the German occupation of Norway during change the second during to rewrite, During... during is poor prose
  • However, construction of the tunnel took much longer time than expected remove "time"
  • It would require investments of NOK 120 million link NOK
      • I'll pass the article when "The line then reaches Lerkendal Station, the only station on the line proper, which is located 2.55 kilometers I don't understand what you mean, "the only station on the line proper"." from above is fixed. If the sentence is proper, then could you explain what it means? Albacore (talk) 23:26, 23 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        • Sorry for missing that point. My though was that technically Leagen Station is located on the Nordland Line, but I agree that the sentence is awkward and I've simply removed the bit about line proper. Arsenikk (talk) 23:41, 23 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Passed. Albacore (talk) 02:50, 24 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]