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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 16:59, 18 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Looks interesting! I will review this (hopefully) later today. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 16:59, 18 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Okay! Per your changes implemented I am now happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 05:45, 19 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Copyvio check

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  • The quotation from Renée DiResta is a concern.
    • It's been rephrased; if it's still too close, do you think it's worth keeping?
      • Yes, it looks good now!
  • The sentence starting "According to Wikimedia Foundation spokeswoman Chantal De Soto, as of the end of July 2020," is too closely paraphrased.
    • I actually just cut this phrase; the first paragraph of that section details editor statistics during 2020, so I don't feel this is necessary as it's not the most up to date information.
      • Good choice.

Everything else is good per WP:COPYQUOTE.

Files

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All images used are appropriate, relevant, of good quality and copyright-free:

File:WMF coronavirus pandemic message 2.png: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:FACT- 5G mobile networks DO NOT spread COVID-19.svg: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:Screenshot of the Template for the 2019–20 coronavirus pandemic on the English Wikipedia as of 2021-04-03.png: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:Wikiproject viewership march 2020.png: GNU General Public License;
File:WikiProject COVID-19 Urdu Logo.svg: CC-BY-SA 4.0;
File:Wikimedia Summit 2019 - Portrait Sandister Tei (1).jpg: CC-BY-SA 4.0;
File:WikiArabia '19 517 (cropped) (cropped).jpg: CC-BY-SA 4.0.

Prose

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  • Wikilink the first mentions of COVID-19 and COVID-19 pandemic in the body as they are relevant to understanding this article.
    • Done
  • "In mid-March 2020" – in all other instances only the month is mentioned.
    • I believe this clarifies when in March it was written because March 2020 was when most lockdowns happened across the U.S.; an article written on March 1, 2020 would have a very different perception of COVID than an article written on March 30, 2020. Does march have a 31st? Eh, who knows anymore.
      • Ah, I see! That is fair enough.
  • "Wikipedia experienced an increase in readership during the COVID-19 pandemic." – this line could probably be mentioned in the first paragraph.
    • Added
  • "Wikipedia editors have averaged" – change to "Wikipedia editors had averaged"
  • "(to pandemic-related pages)." – are the parentheses necessary? Also:
  • "pandemic-related pages" is slightly ambiguous as COVID-19 was not immediately declared a pandemic.
    • To address the last three, I rephrased the sentence to be past tense and to fit the changes
      • Looks good.
  • "there were nearly 7,000 Wikipedia articles" – Wikipedia articles is redundant IMO; just articles should work fine.
    • Fixed
  • CNET should not be italicised.
    • Fixed
  • "setting up "sock puppets" accounts" – change sock puppets to singular.
    • Fixed
  • The quotation from Renée DiResta is far too long.
    • Fixed, as addressed under "Other"
  • Wikilink media ecosystem.
    • Fixed
  • The paragraph starting "One study found that Wikipedia's coverage of the COVID-19 pandemic from January to May 2020" feels out of place to me. I would perhaps move it near the top of the article?
    • Moved to be the second paragraph under "Wikipedia"
      • More fitting :)
  • "study showed that nearly 2% of COVID-19-related literature" – change to "two percent" per MOS:%.
    • Fixed
  • The sentence starting "On 16 June 2021, Wikipedia's Arbitration Committee closed" does not seem notable. I can see why it is included, but the only citations for it are to Wikipedia itself. Also, most non-editors will likely not find this interesting.
    • I've cleaned up this paragraph. Do you feel the sourcing complies with WP:ABOUTSELF?
      • Looks to be.
  • "known as WikiProjects helped to steward the English Wikipedia's pandemic coverage," – steward?
    • I've seen steward used to describe supervision before, but I've replaced it, as I do agree it's an odd choice of words
      • Thanks—noted.
  • I would add some more context to the paragraph about the 2020 Tablighi Jamaat COVID-19 hotspot in Delhi article, like mentioning why/to whom it caused controversy.
    • Done; I did add some citations too, in case you need to take that into consideration for spotchecking.
  • "to the English Wikipedia had increased by 20% due" – "20 percent".
    • Fixed
  • Most of the information about other language editions of Wikipedia are from early and mid-2020 (which makes sense as that is when media interest kinda peaked). Are there any notable updates available since then?
    • I don't believe so; searches through Google News and Scholar show no results for the different things mentioned. Sadly, it seems that reporting on COVID has seriously curbed since 2020.
  • "India's Ministry of Health and Family Welfare and National Health Authority, and the World Health Organization to improve coverage." – World Health Organization is a duplicate link.
    • Fixed
  • "The Wikimedia Foundation, the nonprofit organization" – Wikimedia Foundation is a duplicate link.
    • Fixed

LunaEatsTuna I believe I've addressed everything here. MyCatIsAChonk (talk) 22:27, 18 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Refs

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Spotcheck:

  • 1 checkY
  • Ref 2b:
    • The WP article states "had become the 4th most viewed article on the website of all time" whilst the cited article says the COVID-19 pandemic entry was only thirty-fourth.
      • Huh, that's odd; probably a typo from the editor, but thanks for finding that, that is a pretty major piece of info to be skewing. I also added some up to date info to that paragraph if you need to take a look.
  • Ref 3c
  • 4 checkY
  • 5 checkY
  • 10 checkY
  • 12 checkY
  • 24 checkY

I'll stop here :). @MyCatIsAChonk: Spotcheck done. This plus my new point about the External links below (very bottom) are my only two concerns than I believe I should be able to pass this. ツLunaEatsTuna (💬)— 23:20, 18 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Formatting
  • Wikilink the publication names of refs 2, 15 and 33.
    • Added
  • Is a non-URL publication name available for ref 18?
    • Respectfully, what do you mean? Are you referring to the paywall? If that's the issue, I've added an archived URL.
      • Ah, I mean News-Medical.net; is that its official name or is it News Medical etc?
  • Ref 41 is missing a publisher.
    • Fixed

Other

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Section formatting, See also, navboxes, portals, other templates and categories good.

  • The short description is really vague; how about "Wikipedia's response to a world event" or something similar to that?
    • Changed to "Wikipedia's response to global pandemic"
  • Recommend adding template:Use X English.
    • Added
  • Please add WP:ALT text if you can.
    • Added
  • Minor cosmetic error—some headings have initial and succeeding spaces whilst others do not. This is a super easy fix but due to how even they both are I could not assess which style was the preferred one :3
    • What do you mean by this? I apologize for my lack of understanding, but I don't quite know what you're referring to; the headings look fine on my end (to clarify, I'm using the Vector 2022 skin).
  • In External links, I would move Thalen and "Meet some of the women sharing …" to Further reading and remove the remaining two Medium sources. They feel somewhat excessive IMO.
    • All fixed now
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