User:Leolsz/Alternative hypothesis/Shg7D1 Peer Review

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Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead

Guiding questions:

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
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Content

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Sources and References

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Check a few links. Do they work?

Organization

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Overall impressions

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What are the strengths of the content added?
How can the content added be improved?

Examples of good feedback

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General info[edit]

Whose work are you reviewing?

Leolz

Link to draft you're reviewing
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Leolsz/Alternative_hypothesis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
Alternative hypothesis

Evaluate the drafted changes[edit]

The biggest shortcomings that I see with this article are issues with grammar, clarity, a lack of examples, and a lack of citations. Here are a few suggestions for improvement:

There are a number of grammatical and clarity errors in the lead.
- The first sentence is both unclear and grammatically incorrect. "a position that states something is happening" is both inaccurate and unclear, and the alternative hypothesis is not necessarily "preferred" over the original hypothesis (e.g. testing whether or not gender affects test scores).
- “In statistics, alternative hypothesis is…” should be changed to "In statistics, the alternative hypothesis is…”
- The last sentence, "In the domain of inferential statistics two rival hypotheses can be compared by explanatory power and predictive power," is vague and some elaboration as to why we might find this useful would be nice.

The term research hypothesis is not clearly defined, and there are no citations to show that this term is in fact used in academia.
The example is very bare-bones. It would be helpful to explain that the test assumes the null hypothesis to be true and determines how likely it is we see our observed data if the null hypothesis is true, in order to determine if the alternative hypothesis is false. This shows that the alternative hypothesis represents a departure from what we expect/assume
The section for types of hypothesis contains no citations
Point hypothesis could be better explained
The explanations for both one-tailed and two-tailed hypothesis reference a distributions tail, but it may be unclear what "tail" refers to (assume that someone with no knowledge of statistics is reading this article. How can we add relevant information or direct them to a page that includes said information?)
The article could benefit from more links to other articles and/or more graphics, e.g. that of the critical region for a one-tailed versus a two-tailed test
It would probably be helpful to include the mathematical formulation for different alternative hypothesis: e.g. if H_0 is \mu = 0, then a one-tailed alternative hypothesis could be that \mu > 0 and the two-tailed alternative hypothesis is \mu != 0.
The difference between a non-directional and a two-tailed alternative hypothesis is unclear to me. It might be useful to give an example of a non-directional alternative hypothesis that isn’t also a two-tailed alternative hypothesis