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Poorly written article, lots of irrelevant information. Not knowledgable enough about the subject to do it myself. why are we waiting why are we waiting

Rather interesting. After I heavily edited it, I noticed that it had been listed as a GA in June of 2006, and that not much had changed since then. But I agree, it was horribly written, except for the parts the sounded like they came right out Rolling Stone or something.
However, I'm not sure my redactions leave it significantly better. At least there's less material to object to. But I certainly had to cut out the "feel" of the albums (because in a lot of cases, I had no idea what these descriptions were saying).
Hopefully now others can do something meaningful with it.
--Otheus 04:47, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]


Perhaps one of the cleanup team could arrange these words into a sentence: "She also had a collaboration with Colombian artist Juanes, in the song "Fotografia" where she showed her diversity of yet another language." Honestly, if this is one of the "Arts good articles" then I shudder to think what the bad ones look like.