Talk:Andjar Asmara/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 17:04, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

• Early life and theatre: "he is recorded as establishing the magazine Doenia Film". Huh? Reads funny.
  • Changed.
• Early life and theatre: Link India
  • Not done, per WP:OVERLINKING, specifically "Avoid linking the names of major geographic features and locations,"
• Legacy: "dramas" could please you clarify?
  • Dramas --> stage plays
• References: Use actual sub-sections for Footnotes and Bibliography, as per MOS:ACCESS
  • Got that already

Great stuff; perhaps even FA worthy. I'll put this on hold for now, for the minors to be addressed. TBrandley 01:20, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

Wow, that was quick. Alright, looks good now. Pass. Well done! TBrandley 01:26, 2 September 2012 (UTC)

• Might as well finish it before work, hehe. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:31, 2 September 2012 (UTC)