Talk:Bukit Panjang MRT/LRT station/GA1

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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  • Lead tells us where it's "located" twice, I understand why but the repeat of "is located" is jarring.
    •  Fixed
  • "the Downtown line station" use the abbreviation.
    •  Fixed
  • BP6 and DT1 are noted in the infobox but not explained or referenced anywhere.
    •  Fixed in station details services subsection--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "with the artwork" reads odd. Either remove "the" or explain more about what "the" artwork is.
  • "Bus, Taxi" no need for capital T.
    •  Fixed
  • BPLRT why isn't it BPLRTL i.e. with an L for line, like DTL?
  • "The station opened..." avoid single-sentence paragraphs.
    •  Fixed
  • "10,000 regular" avoid starting sentences with numbers.
    •  Fixed
  • No information about the construction? Just straight in with when it opened, seems incomplete.
    • There are very little accessible details regarding the construction of the BPLRT. But I can probably still say when the line was first announced (will check a few sources later).--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "failure on the evening of 29 August 2001" -> "failure the previous evening" would suffice.
    •  Fixed
  • "at 10:15 am later that day" it wasn't later that day, it was the following day.
    •  Fixed rephrased entire section to make it more chronological.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " Half-Height Platform Barriers were installed on the LRT Platforms. " why all the capitalisation?
    •  Fixed removed capitalisation
  • "Downtown Line" suddenly a capital L for line?
    •  Fixed
  • Image captions are fragments so don't need full stops.
    •  Fixed
  • "When questioned" by whom?
    •  Fixed the public (letters sent to LTA)--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " the Downtown line trains" use the abbreviation.
    •  Fixed
  • "The Contract 912 for" no need for The.
    •  Fixed
  • " S$452.4 million" translate into something like US$
    •  Fixed
  • "massive" bit POV.
    •  Fixed
  • "work for Downtown line 2 is being carried out" was
    •  Fixed
  • " construction site for the Downtown line in the" use the abbreviation.
    •  Fixed
  • What happened to the sinkhole? You move quickly onto a fire.
  • "opened on 9 February 2018" why late?
  • "The artwork showcases an impressive row of tall HDB... " sounds like a guidebook.
    •  Fixed
  • " ranges between" range, frequencies is plural.
    •  Fixed
  • "The DTL station is not directly connected " it feels like this is the third time I've read this.
    •  Fixed
  • "station is[28][29] " something missing.
  • Spaced hyphens in ref titles need to be en-dashes.
  • Ref 4 is tagged as dead.
    •  Fixed
  • Compare ref 7 and 8, The Straits Times is a work.
    •  Fixed
  • Some sources you have LTA, others you have www.lta.gov.sg, aren't they one and the same?
    •  Fixed
  • I also see eresources.nlb.gov.sg where previously that was www.lta.gov.sg.
    • If you are talking about ref 31, that because that is from infopedia, not LTA.--ZKang123 (talk) 13:36, 4 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ref 25 missing access and/or publication date.
    •  Fixed

That's it, on hold. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 09:06, 3 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: any further updates on this?--ZKang123 (talk) 11:40, 9 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
All is just swell, I've promoted. Nice work. The Rambling Man (Hands! Face! Space!!!!) 12:17, 9 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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