Talk:Down to Earth (Justin Bieber song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 00:36, 13 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead

• Link puppy love

Done.

• Include labels in lead

Will add if must, but labels are usually only relegated for the album's article.Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:46, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

It's up to you, but you include the release date of the album, so why not the label? Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:29, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

Background and composition

• Trim File:Downtoearth.mp3.ogg to 24.5 seconds. Maybe move it, too, so that the mp3 part is not there

Leaving note on your talk page making request of you :)

• "The track was one of three songs on the standard edition of the album" - name the album

Done

• Link ballad

Done

• Include tempo (80 bpm)

Done

• Link D major

Done

• Numbers in notes should be in subscript

Done

• Link chord progression

Done

• "During the latter performance, Bieber sits on a stool" - should be in past tense

Considering tour is ongoing and the performance is still given.... Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:49, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

Reception

• "Although Ashante Infantry of Toronto Star said a turn-off of the song was the "Mafia" tag by the production team, Midi Mafia, at the beginning of the song, she called "Down to Earth" one of the best tracks on the album." - what is the "Mafia" tag?

The "Mafia" tag at the begnning of the song is all I know how to explain it as Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 16:51, 23 December 2010 (UTC)

• Is the Hot Digital Songs chart notable, considering that it is not in the table? It also reads confusingly

The chartings of singles on the digital and airplay charts is generally included 4 Minutes (Madonna song), as to understand how in charted on the Hot 100.

• Why are the US and Canada charts lumped together, but the UK one is at the end. Is it meant to read "after the release of My World 2.0"? And link UK Singles Chart somewhere.

The song debuted in the US and Canada consecutively, the UK was later. And it is after the released of MW not MW2.0

OK, nice work now, I'm passing. Adabow (talk · contribs) 19:29, 23 December 2010 (UTC)