Talk:I Love You (Miss Robot)

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:51, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"The song was performed live in 2010, which was the first performance of all songs from the album." doesn't read great. Maybe "The song was performed live in 2010, as part of the first performance of the whole album."
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Lead doesn't cover all aspects of the article, such as critical reception, when was it first played/released etc?
- I think it does. "I Love You (Miss Robot)" is a song written and produced by The Buggles for their debut studio album The Age of Plastic (Background section). The song is, according to Geoff Downes, about "being on the road and making love to someone you don't really like", although music critics consider the song's subject having to do with a robot (Music Lyrics and critical reception). The song was performed live in 2010, which was the first performance of all songs from the album. (Live performances, [also info of when it was first performed])." EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Lead expanded a bit more. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 13:40, 7 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"by Buggles members" isn't it "The Buggles"?
- Done changed it Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Similar for the image caption of Horn and Downes. Incidentally, I'd move that image down to the Personnel section.
- I removed the image Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I'm not sure why you couldn't list the personnel here as well, it's not as if there are many...
- Done added personnel Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" at a BPM of 82" maybe this is a common convention, but I would have thought it better to be "at 82 BPM."
- As this was from an unreliable source, I removed it. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
" Geoff Downes is also.." no need to repeat the first name and no need to relink.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
So, is it the case that it was never released as a single? Worth noting that I guess.
- Where? EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - Just statement somewhere covering the fact it was never released as a single would be fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:22, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done added in background section Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:26, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Instead of "in French" in the ref title, use a lang=French parameter in the reference template.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Ref 7 needs en-dashes for the title, not hyphens.
- Done. ~~Its now ref 6.~~ 8. Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I'm sure it's fine, but what makes oneil.com.au a reliable source?
- Source removed Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 15:11, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Placing the article on hold to resolve this minor issues. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:07, 5 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Reference for "billed as the "The Lost Gig"."?
- Ref added Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 17:43, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Mojo -> MOJO (according to our article).
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 17:43, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Consider wikt linking pukka as it's not a common term outside the UK in this context.
- Done Editor Eat ma talk page up, scotty! 17:43, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The Rambling Man (talk) 15:59, 13 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]