Talk:It's a SpongeBob Christmas!/GA2
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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 21:11, 27 April 2013 (UTC) Okay, I'm going to take this article on. -- Zanimum (talk) 21:11, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
- Infobox
- Production code: should there not be a space between the closing bracket and the second set of numbers?
- I'm really sorry but I don't get it. What bracket and second set of numbers?
- Production code: should there not be a space between the closing bracket and the second set of numbers?
- Lead:
- While it seems redundant at times, you can't have something in the lead without having it in the rest of the article. Specifically, the sentence about it debuting on CBS. That fact alone makes this episode notable, animation aside, but it needs to be discussed elsewhere. (Does Hispanic Business or TV by the Numbers specifically mention that?)
Done remove the sentence since it wasn't mentioned in the sources.
- I'd like to see a sentence about the plot itself in the lead. Most of the article is the plot. Perhaps a periphery mention of the Annie, DVD, and the soundtrack?
- Done
- While it seems redundant at times, you can't have something in the lead without having it in the rest of the article. Specifically, the sentence about it debuting on CBS. That fact alone makes this episode notable, animation aside, but it needs to be discussed elsewhere. (Does Hispanic Business or TV by the Numbers specifically mention that?)
- Production
- CHANGE: The episode, which was animated in stop motion, was inspired by the classic TV Rankin/Bass specials, Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer andSanta Claus Is Comin' to Town.[4]
- Done
- CHANGE: The episode, which was animated in stop motion, was inspired by the classic TV Rankin/Bass specials, Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer andSanta Claus Is Comin' to Town.[4]
- Release and ratings
- No digital download? I like tactile release as much as the next person, but I know that most Nick productions are available on iTunes.
- Done
- No digital download? I like tactile release as much as the next person, but I know that most Nick productions are available on iTunes.
- Reception
- “In 2013, the special was nominated at the 40th Annie Awards...” What are the Annie Awards? (I say that as someone that sent a photographer to them for Wikinews about five years ago.) Yes, people can follow the wikilink, but they shouldn't have to, to find out it's an industry award.
- How about if it wasn't because I've changed that section into a table.
- “In 2013, the special was nominated at the 40th Annie Awards...” What are the Annie Awards? (I say that as someone that sent a photographer to them for Wikinews about five years ago.) Yes, people can follow the wikilink, but they shouldn't have to, to find out it's an industry award.
I'll take a look at plot after this. -- Zanimum (talk) 17:39, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Sorry about the delay. All of my comment above, and the comments in GA1 have been addressed. I love the new pull quotes. The only remaining issue with article, can you trim just a teeny bit off some of the run-on sentences in the plot section? I think you can edit a teeny bit, removing unnecessary detail, but keeping the plot intact. Otherwise, it's good to go. -- Zanimum (talk) 20:49, 22 May 2013 (UTC)