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A fact from Jack Vainisi appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 2 December 2018 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
The family was so ingrained in the Bears organization that a group of players would come over to the Vainisi house every year for an authentic home-cooked Italian meal by Marie. ===>>> The family was so ingrained in the Bears organization that a group of players came over to the Vainisi house every year for a home-cooked Italian meal by Marie. (get rid of "would" tense, and also "authentic")
was offered a scholarship to play at Notre Dame ===>>> was offered an athletic scholarship to Notre Dame. (to avoid repetition with this sentence and the next)
The Packers' new coach, Gene Ronzani, had played for the Bears and dined at the Vainisi's; Ronzani's assistant Hugh Devore coached Vainisi at Notre Dame. ===>>> The Packers' new coach, Gene Ronzani, had played for the Bears and dined at the Vainisi's, while Ronzani's assistant Hugh Devore had coached Vainisi at Notre Dame. (a semicolon isn't right here.)
I don't think "Board of Directors" should be capitalized (here, the next sentence, and the next section)
the Packers would go on to achieve five championships in seven years and win over 100 games in the 1960s. ===>>> the Packers would go on to win five championships in seven years and over 100 games in the 1960s.
More recently, a monument honoring his legacy was erected at the entrance to the Titletown District, adjacent to Lambeau Field. ===>>> More recently, the Packers erected a monument honoring his legacy at the entrance to the Titletown District, adjacent to Lambeau Field.
