Talk:Jeremy Swayman

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Review: July 9, 2022. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 17:39, 31 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this later. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:39, 31 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Early life[edit]

I am confused why you include two profiles instead of just one (ref #2 is his nhl.com profile and ref #54 is his elite prospects profile).
- Because I didn't add the EP profile, see below
How did he join the Sioux Falls Stampede? Was he drafted?
- Added draft position w/ ref
This could be an interesting article to improve his USHL section.
- Looks like I already used it! Slightly tweaked that section with the new ref about his draft, though

Collegiate[edit]

Please fix the WL UMass Minutemen men's ice hockey to UMass Minutemen ice hockey in order to avoid a redirect
- Done

Awards and honors[edit]

Please fix reference #53 and #55 that say nhl.com instead of National Hockey League like your other refs.
- This section was altered by a disruptive editor who adds awards to various Bruins player pages without checking for already-used refs (or if, like "bronze medalist", they're better listed elsewhere). Altered the section.

HickoryOughtShirt?4 Responded to all comments; also added prose about the remainder of the 2021–22 season (including postseason), his performance at 2022 Worlds, and two images. — Ghost River 16:35, 20 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

HickoryOughtShirt?4 Just checking in on this. — Ghost River 18:02, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GhostRiver, my apologies for the delay. Looks good, passing! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:47, 9 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]