Talk:Kevin O'Toole (bodybuilder)

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Image restored[edit]

The image previously deleted for unwarranted reasons (which were given as "bullshit") has been restored. The previous deletion was without good cause, other than apparent pettiness - or perhaps suspicion this is a morph (it's not).Skookum1 (talk) 15:01, 14 May 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Reference Sources[edit]

The lack of sources in this article is concerning. Websites referenced on the Wiki page also lack references and are unreliable sources. I recommend (and will look into myself) more references with supporting evidence. WilliamStadder (talk) 18:59, 8 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

The article draws all the information from two sources, questioning the notability of the references. There is also a lot of questionable information that is not cited. Examples include his decision to drop out of competitive body building and him forgetting to add bronzer before a competition. I feel that although this information helps the Wiki page flow, there needs to be a source to reference it from. How did we get that information??

I also feel some additional information could be added. Did he get married? Have kids? Extra information that would improve the quality of the biography. When looking into more information about Kevin, I found some information on his personal training, I will add that to the article.

The second reference leads to the correct website but has removed any information about Kevin O'Toole and his championships. I will delete that reference and provide the reference list with a new source where I have found information on his personal training career. The first reference, "credentials" remains accurate but has very little information. WilliamStadder (talk) 18:06, 9 March 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by WilliamStadder (talk • contribs)

Edits[edit]

I have added in some additional information about Kevin's life now (KO Fitness owner and operator) as well as some additional accomplishments throughout his career (certifications). I researched some additional sources and found some supporting evidence to previous claims made about Kevin. Because he is self-identified as Metis, I provided some additional insight on how his bodybuilding career displays his Metis status on a larger scale than most ordinary people. WilliamStadder (talk) 19:40, 22 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]