Talk:The Incredible Shrinking Man/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 23:44, 15 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Sorry about the wait. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 22:04, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

No rush! :) Andrzejbanas (talk) 22:28, 17 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

April, Paul, and Raymond's involvement in the film is unsourced, as are William, Billy, and Orangey (mew)

Updated. I'm removing Orangey for now as this source says it might not have been Orangey? :( I'll add it back when this most important bit of cat acting is confirmed. I think the article survives without it though. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:32, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"On set photography" -> "On-set photography"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Arnold ordered about 100 condoms and placed them on a treadmill so they would drop in sequence." - No complaints, I just wanted to emphasize how funny a line this is out of context.

Indeed. The copy-editor said something similar earlier. :) Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Universal's intended" -> "Universal intended"

Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 13:41, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Try to paraphrase more

I cut out some more of the quotes. I left some of the larger ones that I feel go into specific details that should be quoted. What do you think @Abryn:? Andrzejbanas (talk) 15:26, 22 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

All good, great job! - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 02:22, 26 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

That's about it. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 17:59, 18 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]