Talk:Vettore Cappello/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:42, 4 November 2018 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:42, 4 November 2018 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links OK
• Images properly licensed.
• Clarify that Sant'Elena is a church in the caption to the lede photo.
  • Done.
• De-link the second usage of Captain general of the sea
  • You mean in the article body? I follow the rule of always linking in the first occurrence in the body, not counting the lede, per MOS:DUPLINK.
    • You're not wrong, but this isn't a short enough article to warrant linking it twice, IMO. It's fine if you think differently.
• savio "recuperandi pecunias" Can you explain a little what this is? Constantine ✍ 13:27, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
  • It was evidently one of the boards of savi or wise men, and had fiscal duties ("recuperandi pecunias" means something like "for the recovery of funds"), but I haven't found any source on the details of the functions of this office. I don't even know whether this was a regular magistracy (unlikely since I can't find it mentioned anywhere else) or an ad hoc post.
• by overssing fortification works in Coron, Modon, Nauplia, Lepanto, and Negroponte, until his tenure expired in November Awkward. Reinforcing, repairing, etc.? Plus the typo
  • Done.
• In September he was elected a member of the Ten. Out of chronological sequence--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:35, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
  • Forgot to add the year there, it is actually September 1465.

Hi Sturmvogel 66, thanks for taking this on. I've dealt with or otherwise replied to the issues you pointed out. Anything else, even above and beyond GA requirements? Constantine ✍ 13:27, 12 November 2018 (UTC)

• The article gives enough context I think, but this is a period I actually know something about, so I'm probably not the best judge.
• There are a couple of overlinks in the main body that need to be removed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:13, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
  • Done. Constantine ✍ 14:38, 15 November 2018 (UTC)