User talk:Cinema4242

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Hana Makhmalbaf[edit]

Minor revisions necessary.

Great start!
Add release years to film titles in the lead section.
Several of Makhmalbaf's films have Wikipedia pages about them, so make sure not to duplicate information that is already on those pages on your page. You should go ahead and move your content to mainspace, but you will need to add more content about Makhmalbaf herself.
When you add your content to mainspace, make sure to integrate it into the existing content.
Fix the errors in the references section.
Fix errors in reference #3. The date is incorrect and the reference is missing the publisher.

Chronophoto (talk) 14:52, 15 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]