User talk:Margaretconway1702

This user is a student editor in Loyola_University_Chicago/Communication,_Language,_and_Gender_-_COMM_281_(Spring_2024) .

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Hello, Margaretconway1702, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:55, 13 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft[edit]

Hi Margaret and Allanahpollard. I returned your draft to your sandbox because it isn't ready to go live yet.

There are several issues, but one of the major ones is tone. For example, it says

It is an organization run by dedicated educators committed to providing educational support to refugee children. [Emphasis added]

Terms like "dedicated" and "committed" aren't appropriate for an encyclopaedia article. They aren't neutral in tone, they're opinions.

You also need more sources, and you need to change the external links in the body of the article to properly-formatted inline citations. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:24, 29 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]