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A Quiet Night In[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because it's already a GA, and I'd like to see it reach FA. Hopefully, it will be a part of a good (or even featured) topic as I work on articles related to Inside No. 9. I think the topic's an interesting one- it's an episode from the new series by Pemberton and Shearsmith, of The League of Gentlemen fame. Thanks, J Milburn (talk) 18:56, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

If anyone has any views about the non-free content use in the article, they are welcome to comment here. J Milburn (talk) 22:55, 3 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Midnightblueowl[edit]

This isn't a theme with which I have any expertise, but I have a few pointers that might be of help. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:05, 8 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

In the lede, we refer to "the couple"; perhaps the meaning here could be made more explicit, i.e. a couple of children, a married couple etc.
Perhaps mention that Psychoville was a TV series in the introduction.
In the Production section, you state "offered the "ideal" format", but we should probably be clear who exact we are quoting.
""A Quiet Night In", in addition to Pemberton and Shearsmith, starred" - Maybe this would be better rephrased as "In addition to Pemberton and Shearsmith, "A Quiet Night In" starred..."
""part Chuckle Brothers-esque slapstick, part Tarantino-esque blood-letting"" – links to Chuckle Brothers and Quentin Tarantino ?
Add a reference after the quotebox referencing the complaint in the "Reception" section. Midnightblueowl (talk) 14:05, 8 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your comments. I've made the changes you suggested. J Milburn (talk) 15:55, 9 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]