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Hopful I can get this to FL status at some piont.

Thanks, Buc (talk) 19:58, 17 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Avoid bold links in the lead per WP:MOS.
Put (NFL) after National Football League.
Remove full stop in caption - it's a sentence fragment so it doesn't need a full stop per WP:MOS.
Four paras in lead is too much for such a short article - see WP:LEAD.
Explain what AFC is before you use it.
Link Super Bowl.
Explain what a "losing season" is.
"...and were AFC West champions twice and AFC champions once." and.. and... reads clumsily.
"two years in a row" prefer "for two consecutive years"
"have also experienced one notable periods of decline" ?!
"when they never made the playoffs " just "did not make the playoffs" is better.
"They also had their two worst seasons " ..." They also experienced their..." would be better.
"But they never made the playoffs prior to the AFL-NFL merger in 1970." don't start a sentence with "But..." and avoid this "never made..." stuff.
Explicit references required for the "Coach of the Year" etc awards.
Explain the significance of "The Drive" and "The Fumble" for non-experts.
"sportsecyclopedia.com. " or "Sports Encyclopedia"? Same site is given different parameters.

The Rambling Man (talk) 08:54, 18 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]