Wikipedia:Peer review/Lego Star Wars: The Complete Saga/archive1

Lego Star Wars: The Complete Saga

I've listed this article for peer review because… The gameplay is more descriptive, the plots for all 6 films have been edited to fit the lack of dialogue in the game, and the development section has a bit more content (I have a feeling I should add more to that section of the article).

Also, because Lego Star Wars: The Skywalker Saga is coming out in 2020, I want to see if this could somehow become a featured article on whatever day Lego Star Wars: The Skywalker Saga will be released in stores.

Thanks, OcelotCreeper (talk) 16:12, 20 March 2020 (UTC)

Before I've even read the article, I noticed a couple things. First off, the gameplay section needs to be sourced. This can be sourced from reviews such as from IGN or Gamespot, or from the manual that comes with the physical copy of the game if you have that. Secondly, the reception section needs to be expanded. What did critics like about the game? What did they not like? Take a look at the reception section of Lego Star Wars II: The Original Trilogy, which is currently a featured article. I don't like how big the review table is for that article, but the text found within the reception section is exactly what you should strive for. The rest of the article is great too, as the gameplay section is sourced, and the development and release sections are fully fleshed out. Famous Hobo (talk) 01:26, 10 April 2020 (UTC)