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Care Bears Movie II: A New Generation[edit]

See also: February 2006 FAC and December 2005 PR

I am sorry to say that, after working so hard to get this page featured the last time, it really is a mess. One of my first efforts on WP has now turned into a mediocre shadow of its past self. The Plot section is really getting on my nerves, even when it is true I started the article; it got so long, it split off into its own article during FAC, and returned to the root page recently.

I am trying once again to get it back to FA, or even more suitably, GA level. (Sorry again if I'm still hunting down the production details...) --Slgrandson (page - messages - contribs) 04:11, 16 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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