Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Troop engagements of the American Civil War, 1863

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No consensus to promote at this time. Anotherclown (talk) 23:09, 22 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Troop engagements of the American Civil War, 1863[edit]

Nominator(s): Wild Wolf (talk)

I am seeking to pass this article for AL class. It is a listing of American Civil War engagements for the year 1863. Wild Wolf (talk) 22:09, 7 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

I think the references are too bundled, making specific details of those huge paragraphs hard to verify. Would like to see:

^ Kennedy, pp. 197–199, 202–213, 251–259.
^ Kennedy, pp. 147–173, 181–184, 225–231, 241–247.
^ Kennedy, pp. 139, 179–180, 232.

broken down into more in-line citations, to support individual sentences, esp. those with dates/numbers/stats. Other than that, all seems fine.

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