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Tent pegging[edit]

As the origins of tent pegging lie in training of Asian and European cavalry, I hope that Wikipedians with an interest or expertise in the history of cavalry and martial training might offer the article the benefit of their constructive criticisms. - Tilting 21:49, 1 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Kirill Lokshin[edit]

Very interesting article! Some ideas:

  • "However, there are few reliable accounts of a cavalry squadron ever employing such tactics." - if there are any you can dig up, they should probably be discussed here.
  • Add more information on the modern sport. Are their major competitions? Leagues? International champions? And so forth.
  • More inline citations would be helpful, of course.

Overall, though, looks quite nice! Kirill Lokshin 08:47, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your suggestions which I very much appreciated. I have made a number of additions to the inline references, citations, competitions, and use of tent pegging tactics in the field, as per your suggestions above. - Tilting 15:50, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Good work! Kirill Lokshin 15:59, 2 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]