User contributions for David Tornheim
A user with 16,822 edits. Account created on 15 July 2008.
30 December 2017
- 08:1308:13, 30 December 2017 diff hist −187 Xenia, Ohio →Railroads: remove what appears to be promotion WP:PROMO created by Xenia. Need better *independent* WP:RS for this to stand Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
28 December 2017
- 12:4012:40, 28 December 2017 diff hist +613 Confirmation bias Undid revision 817407017 by PaleoNeonate (talk) I support the inclusion per WP:LEDE, especially given there is long section on bias in science. 2013 reference is recent.
- 12:3112:31, 28 December 2017 diff hist +13 Dakota Access Pipeline protests Undid revision 817446862 by 208.107.158.91 (talk) the WP:RS says that there were armed "soliders." Please no WP:OR
- 12:2812:28, 28 December 2017 diff hist +68 Dakota Access Pipeline protests Undid revision 817446550 by 208.107.158.91 (talk) WP:RS says that water cannons were used. Reason stated for removing water cannon is WP:OR
27 December 2017
- 06:3906:39, 27 December 2017 diff hist +20 Two Weeks Notice →Plot: rewrite last sentence(s) of paragraph 2 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:3406:34, 27 December 2017 diff hist +1 m Two Weeks Notice →Plot: correct pronoun Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:3206:32, 27 December 2017 diff hist +1,010 Two Weeks Notice →Plot: revise and expand paragraph 3. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 05:4405:44, 27 December 2017 diff hist +179 Two Weeks Notice →Plot: revise paragraph 2 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 05:3605:36, 27 December 2017 diff hist +82 Two Weeks Notice →Plot: rewrite first paragraph Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 05:1705:17, 27 December 2017 diff hist 0 Two Weeks Notice →Plot: correct two grammar errors Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
7 December 2017
- 07:5807:58, 7 December 2017 diff hist +4 Database →top: wikify relational DB Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:3907:39, 7 December 2017 diff hist −24 Database self-revert -- my revised version focuses on implementation, but first paragraph is about the model.
- 07:3307:33, 7 December 2017 diff hist +24 Database change awkward phrase "more restrictively" to something that is clearer. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:1007:10, 7 December 2017 diff hist −19 Relational database management system →top: changed the sentence to match the text. Even though published in 2014, it seems doubtful this has changed--this text used for current course in Fall 2017. If a source close to today is found, then go ahead and put 2017 back in. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:5806:58, 7 December 2017 diff hist +282 Relational database management system →top: add ref. for statement about popularity of RDBMS Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:5206:52, 7 December 2017 diff hist 0 m IBM Peterlee Relational Test Vehicle →top: changed follow-on to successor Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:5106:51, 7 December 2017 diff hist +1 m Relational database management system →Historical usage of the term: added missing comma Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:5006:50, 7 December 2017 diff hist +1 m Relational database management system →Historical usage of the term: changed typo from "followon" to "follow-on" then to "successor". Alternatives: Follow-up, sequel, update or subsequent version. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:4106:41, 7 December 2017 diff hist −26 Relational database management system →Historical usage of the term: improve readability by putting list as bullets, put each db in a consistent form, other minor grammar imporvements Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:3206:32, 7 December 2017 diff hist −1 m Relational database management system →Historical usage of the term: consistent plural of DBMS (DBMSs) Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
2 December 2017
- 19:2519:25, 2 December 2017 diff hist +25 m Krzysztof Kieślowski →Legacy: Wikify Oxford Univ. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 19:1919:19, 2 December 2017 diff hist +8 Krzysztof Kieślowski →Legacy: add date for context Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 19:1819:18, 2 December 2017 diff hist +8 Krzysztof Kieślowski correct block quote with template
26 November 2017
- 19:4719:47, 26 November 2017 diff hist −12 Adelle Davis →Career as nutritionist and author: correct grammar error and slightly simplify. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
29 October 2017
- 07:2707:27, 29 October 2017 diff hist +324 Botulism →Ukraine: add Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:2207:22, 29 October 2017 diff hist +436 Botulism →China: add 1958-1983 data Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:1607:16, 29 October 2017 diff hist +18 Botulism →Canada: wikify Alaska Native -- please note: our article shows only Alaskan Natives in Alaska, US; however, in the context here, the communities are in Canada. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 07:1107:11, 29 October 2017 diff hist +877 Botulism →Canada: add reference to outbreak in 1985-2015 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:5006:50, 29 October 2017 diff hist +322 Botulism →Epidemiology: add reference from Ontario Ministry of Health. Reference 3 of this article cites Davis's article on MedicineNet reporting ~1,000 annual cases. Hence Ontario Ministry of Health considers Davis's article good RS. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:3806:38, 29 October 2017 diff hist −13 Botulism →Epidemiology: moved all the preliminary material that is about the U.S. to U.S. section Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 06:2606:26, 29 October 2017 diff hist +276 Botulism →Epidemiology: add information and ref. for worldwide incidents. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
23 October 2017
- 23:3423:34, 23 October 2017 diff hist −46 Richard B. Spencer →Speech at University of Florida: simplify see talk page here: Talk:Richard_B._Spencer#.22Heckler.27s_veto.22 Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 23:3223:32, 23 October 2017 diff hist +45 Richard B. Spencer →Speech at University of Florida: By quoting him directly, the ambiguity about whether he was making a legal claim or not is more evident. The response by the attorney is clarified to refer only to the legal form of heckler's veto. (See talk) Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 19:5519:55, 23 October 2017 diff hist +204 Heckler's veto →Law: add ref. -- please note this is pretty old. Hopefully we can find one that is more current not behind a pay wall. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 19:4219:42, 23 October 2017 diff hist −1 m Feiner v. New York →Background: remove extraneous bracket "]" Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
20 October 2017
- 04:4904:49, 20 October 2017 diff hist +15 Square root of negative one restore i that was in the original Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 04:4804:48, 20 October 2017 diff hist −10 Square root of negative one make sqrt look prettier Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 02:2902:29, 20 October 2017 diff hist +14 Richard B. Spencer →Race: change to Race + Ethnicity. See: Talk:Richard_B._Spencer#Ordering_of_.22Views.22_sections Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
17 October 2017
- 16:5616:56, 17 October 2017 diff hist +278 Richard B. Spencer →Early life: add Mother Jones mention of the quote Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
- 01:2401:24, 17 October 2017 diff hist +28 Richard B. Spencer →top: add refusal to renounce KKK Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
15 October 2017
- 11:1111:11, 15 October 2017 diff hist +872 Richard B. Spencer →Public speaking: add information about Ohio speaking engagements
- 03:5303:53, 15 October 2017 diff hist −1 m Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Pre-emption of state laws: correct spelling error
- 03:5203:52, 15 October 2017 diff hist −1 Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Pre-emption of state laws: delete unnecessary period
- 03:3703:37, 15 October 2017 diff hist −5 m Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Confusion with the scope of the Red Flags rule: change past event to past tense
- 03:3503:35, 15 October 2017 diff hist +2 m Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Confusion with the scope of the Red Flags rule: fix subject verb agreement
- 03:3303:33, 15 October 2017 diff hist +2 m Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Identification of possible identity theft (Red Flags rule): fix subject-verb agreement
- 03:2903:29, 15 October 2017 diff hist −2 Fair and Accurate Credit Transactions Act →Difficulty in obtaining credit reports: delete extra period
7 June 2017
- 17:5017:50, 7 June 2017 diff hist +7 Don Messick add citation needed tag -- it says he had stroke at work, so why died in Salinas?
3 June 2017
- 08:1708:17, 3 June 2017 diff hist +16 Coordination complex entire article needs more citations
- 08:1508:15, 3 June 2017 diff hist +23 Coordination complex →Nomenclature and terminology: add refimprove tag
