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Lincoln Town Car

This article has shaped up very nicely, and I would like some ideas on how this article can be improved, and maybe some day it could become a featured article! --Karrmann

The layout is rather confusing. I think that all of the first several sections should be subsections underneath the History section. In addition, please provide WP:FOOTNOTEs where appropriate. Thanks, AndyZ _t 00:57, 8 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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	This article has shaped up very nicely, and I would like some ideas on how this article can be improved, and maybe some day it could become a featured article! --[[User:Karrmann\|Karrmann]]		This article has shaped up very nicely, and I would like some ideas on how this article can be improved, and maybe some day it could become a featured article! --[[User:Karrmann\|Karrmann]]

			*The layout is rather confusing. I think that all of the first several sections should be subsections underneath the History section. In addition, please provide [[WP:FOOTNOTE]]s where appropriate. Thanks, ''[[User:AndyZ\|AndyZ]]'' <sub>[[User talk:AndyZ\|t]]</sub> 00:57, 8 April 2006 (UTC)