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With reference to the alerts that were placed on the article page, I am hoping that these can now be removed. The alerts related to: This article may contain promotional material and other spam.

Since this was inserted a number of changes and edits have been made to the article which should have addressed this issue.

A major contributor to this article appears to have a close connection with its subject.

I'm not exactly sure how to counter this other than to say that I believe that the article stands on its merits as a piece about a noteworthy topic, being the first legal moonshine to be produced in New England, and having been covered in sources such as NY Times, NBC, Bloomberg, as well as a number of regional publications.

This article is an orphan, as no other articles link to it.

There is now a link one other article to this article - Moonshine by country: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Moonshine_by_country

I would be grateful for the views of any editors on this topic. Thank you Fbell74 (talk) 10:18, 13 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

- The creator and updater of this website, FBell74, was a hired for a fee by the owners of the company to create the Wiki page and promote their products: http://www.freelancer.com/u/fbell74.htmlCite error: There are <ref> tags on this page without content in them (see the help page). . Therefore, the concerns of the author having a close connection and promotional nature are justified. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 192.249.47.163 (talk) 12:56, 17 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

- - Fair enough; I take your point re the COI alert.Fbell74 (talk) 00:36, 20 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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FBell74 (talk · contribs) has been paid by Adam von Gootkin on behalf of Onyx Moonshine.

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 ***Fair enough; I take your point re the COI alert.[[User:Fbell74|Fbell74]] ([[User talk:Fbell74|talk]]) 00:36, 20 June 2013 (UTC)
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