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*{{u|Dudley Miles}} All done. Thanks for the comments! '''[[User:BeatlesLedTV|BeatlesLedTV]]''' ([[User talk:BeatlesLedTV|talk]]) 20:30, 30 January 2018 (UTC) |
*{{u|Dudley Miles}} All done. Thanks for the comments! '''[[User:BeatlesLedTV|BeatlesLedTV]]''' ([[User talk:BeatlesLedTV|talk]]) 20:30, 30 January 2018 (UTC) |
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*'''Support'''. [[User:Dudley Miles|Dudley Miles]] ([[User talk:Dudley Miles|talk]]) 20:56, 30 January 2018 (UTC) |
*'''Support'''. [[User:Dudley Miles|Dudley Miles]] ([[User talk:Dudley Miles|talk]]) 20:56, 30 January 2018 (UTC) |
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Source review passed; promoting. --'''[[User:PresN|<span style="color:green">Pres</span>]][[User talk:PresN|<span style="color:blue">N</span>]]''' 20:28, 8 February 2018 (UTC) |
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List of songs recorded by Joy Division
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- Nominator(s): BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:41, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
Now that my Daft Punk list has been promoted and my George Harrison FLC currently has two supports I think I'm safe to nominate this one. Another song list, this time it's the great English rock band Joy Division. Only together for four years (for a very sad reason), I've been working on this one for a while now and I believe it's now qualified for featured status. I'm excited to hear any comments or concerns anyone might have. Happy editing! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 16:41, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
- Comments
- This green link should be archived.
- Removed it. Felt it was unneeded.
- Remove periods before 'and' in every instance.
- Most of them are actually commas. Should I still removed them?
- Yes and actually I meant commas. Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:44, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Yashthepunisher Done. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 18:38, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Yes and actually I meant commas. Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:44, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- The first two sentences of second para can be merged or rephrased.
- Done.
- In 1994, Joy Division's planned debut album, Warsaw, was released under the name "Warsaw". --> In 1994, Joy Division released their debut album under the name Warsaw.
- Done. I kept 'planned' in it because it wasn't their official debut.
Yashthepunisher (talk) 15:42, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Yashthepunisher Thanks very much for the feedback! Comments above. BeatlesLedTV (talk) 17:10, 21 January 2018 (UTC)
- Support this nomination. Yashthepunisher (talk) 11:57, 22 January 2018 (UTC)
Resolved comments from Courcelles (talk) 20:14, 25 January 2018 (UTC) |
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*Sorry to be "that guy", but what is sourcing "After their break-up, twelve compilation albums, two extended plays, four live albums and one video album have been released." and the sentence immediately prior to it?
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- Support. Courcelles (talk) 20:14, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:31, 6 February 2018 (UTC) |
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Comments
The Rambling Man (talk) 20:15, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
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Comments by Dudley
- "a long-lasting influence on the post-punk movement of the late 1970s" "long-lasting" sounds odd for a movement which only lasted a short period.
- Changed to 'impact'
- Looks fine. "break-up" does not sound right to me for a group which carried on under a different name after one member's death, but I cannot think of a better word. Dudley Miles (talk) 08:20, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
- Change to 'dissolution'
- Dudley Miles All done. Thanks for the comments! BeatlesLedTV (talk) 20:30, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
- Support. Dudley Miles (talk) 20:56, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 20:28, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
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