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List of Rugby League World Cup hat-tricks

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Nominator(s): WDM10 (talk) 09:27, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it contains everything needed to become a featured list such as a good lead and a clear table. WDM10 (talk) 09:27, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

Comments I shall submit this review to the WikiCup.

Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:15, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

*We don't start lists with "This is a list"... just like we don't start articles with "This is an article..." Done Consider linking "try" and "field goal" appropriately. Done " Australia has scored the " well, players who play for Australia have... Done "by Bryan Fletcher[2] and Robbie Paul[3] in " move those refs to the end of the sentence. Done " in 2008," easter egg link, try "in the 2008 tournament". Done "Ian Schubert,[9] Damien Blanch[10] and Chris Taripo[11]." similar comment, and last ref goes after punctuation. Done Avoid overlinking, e.g. Australia, Slater, Hayne and Holmes all overlinked in the lead. Done "Field Goals" section, -> goals. And a sortable table of one is a bit odd. Done the unsorted the table. Renaming field goals to goals wouldn't make sense as goals mean a different thing in rugby league. Multiple table: Years should be Tournament(s). Done Spaced hyphens in the ref titles should be en-dashes. Done Where is all the tabulated content reference? No sign of inline references. Done That's it for a quick run through. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 14:14, 27 March 2020 (UTC) The Rambling Man Thanks for your review. Do I need references both in the lead and in the table or will just one suffice? WDM10 (talk) 18:37, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

• Support much much better, good work, my comments resolved. The Rambling Man (Staying alive since 2005!) 09:15, 29 March 2020 (UTC)

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:36, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

;Comments "played in various intervals since 1954" => "played at various intervals since 1954" Done Need to wikilink tries and field goals Done "This is a list of players" - TRM did not mean that you should simply move this wording to the second sentence, he meant that it should not be included at all. Done "The first player to do is was" - something wrong here Done "higher ranked teams against lower ranked teams" - there should be hyphens in higher-ranked and lower-ranked Done "Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored six people have achieved it twice" => "Out of the 62 hat-tricks scored, six players have achieved the feat twice" Done "These being Ian Schubert, Billy Slater, Akuila Uate, Manu Vatuvei, Jarryd Hayne, Suliasi Vunivalu and Valentine Holmes." - this is not a complete sentence. Probably need to join this to the sentence before. Done "10 people have scored " - a sentence should not start with a digit Done "Valentine Holmes is the only player to score 5 and 6 tries respectively in a single game" - respectively is not the right word here. I think you mean "Valentine Holmes is the only player to score both 5 and 6 tries in a single game" Done Also, 5 and 6 should be written as words, as they are under ten Done Many of the rows in the table have no reference Done The Boulevard should sort under B, not T Done I think refs look better centre-aligned Done Ref 4 has no work/publisher Done Neither does ref 10 Done Think that's it from me -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:21, 27 March 2020 (UTC)

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:21, 28 March 2020 (UTC)
*Refs 38 and 40 have no work/publisher Done Inconsistent use of BBC Sport/bbc.co.uk as the work Done Telegraph.co.uk should probably simply be The Daily Telegraph, to be consistent with other official websites of newspapers Done, I made telegraph.co.uk The Daily Telegraph (UK) and I made dailytelegraph.com.au The Daily Telgraph (AU) All the best, ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:36, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:21, 28 March 2020 (UTC)

• Comment – The only issue I can see is that the second word of the Field Goals subheading probably shouldn't be capitalized, since that is not a proper noun or title. Otherwise, the list looks good to me. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:13, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

  Done

  • Support – My only concern has been addressed. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:11, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Source review passed (fixed improper usage of "language" cite parameter, and one instance where you claimed an article was written by "Association, Press"); promoting. --PresN 03:19, 28 April 2020 (UTC)

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