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:::Let's break this down. Do you deny that the leader of the Endeavor Academy is the "master teacher"? -[[User:Will Beback|Will Beback]] 20:10, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
:::Let's break this down. Do you deny that the leader of the Endeavor Academy is the "master teacher"? -[[User:Will Beback|Will Beback]] 20:10, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
:::Second, if Anderson is not connected to the academy then why did we merge his biography? -[[User:Will Beback|Will Beback]] 20:29, 15 July 2006 (UTC)
:::Second, if Anderson is not connected to the academy then why did we merge his biography? -[[User:Will Beback|Will Beback]] 20:29, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

== Leadership ==

About this section and its references:

Endeavor Academy is headed by its primary teacher and founder, Charles Buell Anderson. He is referred to by his students as "Master Teacher," and writes and publishes books under this name.
*{{cite web
|url=http://www.endeavoracademy.com/meet-us/meet-the-master-teacher/meet-the-master-teacher.html
|title=Meet The Master Teacher
|author=Endeavor Academy
|accessdate=2006-07-15
}}
*{{cite web
|url=http://www.xensites.com/eyeoncults/factnet.htm
|title=A comparison of FACTNet’s criteria with Endeavor Academy.
|author=FACTNet
|accessdate=2006-07-15
}}

There isn't any mention of either authoring or books in either of these sources. The first source (primary) mentions nothing about students referring to anyone. In itself, its claims are very POV, a little far fetched, i.e. as [[WP:RS#Self-published_sources_in_articles_about_themselves|reliable resources]] coming from a primary source speaking about itself, they are both contentious and self-serving or self-aggrandizing. There is no mention whatsover in the first reference of anyone named "Anderson", nor is there any mention that "Master Teacher" founded and/or heads the Academy. For all we know, it could be run by a board of directors and sell private shares of stock. The second source never mentions anyone named Anderson either. The most it says directly is: "Master Teacher is the supreme authority, nobody in the cult can question his apparently divine wisdom." It also says, "Not only does the Master Teacher claim he is Jesus but he require constant attention to be focused on him." The statement is as far-fetched as the other statement is self-aggrandizing. I doubt that anything in this reference meets [[WP:LIBEL]], or [[WP:NPOV]], but if you want to add it back in, then according to the guidelines you should be very careful to quote the source, exactly, to avoid having WP be considered a primary source of its own, and you yourself take full liability in the case that you do not quote it directly. See [[Wikipedia:No libel]] "''Avoid paraphrases or inexact quotes or relying on memory when making contentious observations or assertions - and be ready to provide sources or withdraw comments if challenged''" [[User:Ste4k|Ste4k]] 20:33, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

Revision as of 20:33, 15 July 2006

Articles for deletion This article was nominated for deletion on 2006-07-01. The result of the discussion was no consensus.
This article is a frequent source of heated debate. Please try to keep a cool head when responding to comments on this talk page.

Please feel free to place any comments, suggestions or questions regarding Endeavor Academy here. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Scottperry (talkcontribs)

Does this school meet WP:CORP or WP:BIO?? Ste4k 11:51, 30 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding the importance of this article, are there any headlines, or anything else of national recognition that show the dispute between this school and its student to be on the scale of perhaps Waco, or otherwise notorious? If not, then this page looks more like some sort of troll bait. I removed both the self-advertising link, as well as the unsourced anti-advertising link. This school may indeed exist, but it doesn't appear to be as notable as say, Columbine High School, or any other media breaking school. It doesn't appear to meet WP:ORG either. Ste4k 01:19, 1 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I can't answer your questions, but it is standard to include a link to the official website of any subject, be it a person or institution. So far as I can see, there's no reason to adopt a different standard for this article. -Will Beback 01:27, 1 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Whatever standard you are mentioning is news to me. It may be standard for people and/or organizations to add one without a sufficient review of policy, but that doesn't change policy at all. What could be the purpose for such a link, especially since anything on pages there couldn't be used for any content? Ste4k 01:25, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

WP:EL#What should be linked to, see item #1. The purpose is so that readers wishing to learn more have an authoritative link. It's not true that we can't use a subject for a source. They have just as much significance as a source as any other. We don't exclude autobiographies as sources, we just recognize that they are another POV. -Will Beback 08:23, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, I see that now in the Style Guide, however, according to the WP:SPAM guidelines: Please do not add commercial links or links to your own private websites to Wikipedia. Wikipedia is not a vehicle for advertising or a mere collection of external links. You are, however, encouraged to add content instead of links to the encyclopedia. If you feel the link should be added to the article please discuss it on the article's talk page rather than re-adding it. See the welcome page to learn more about Wikipedia. Thanks. Ste4k 17:20, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Adding a link to the official website is not "spamming" Wikipedia. -Will Beback 18:36, 3 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
According to WP:VER primary sources cannot be used, except for information about themselves, and also only if the information pertains to the subject's notability. Ste4k 01:12, 10 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

User:Ste4k has listed Chuck-anderson's-ea-bldg.jpg as a possible copyright violation. Reasons unknown. —Antireconciler 03:54, 9 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Yes, if you go to the listed source of the image, you will find nothing there at all except a test page. Images need to list their source as well as rationale for why they may be used as fair-use, etc. See WP:CV Ste4k 01:10, 10 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Relevence

About the two external links on this page. What is the relevence? Ste4k 01:49, 10 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Original Research

Does this article have any sources? Ste4k 01:59, 10 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

No, it has: zero + however many are in it, and will be added in response to your request for citations. :) Sethie 03:09, 10 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Merge Proposal

copied from Talk:Charles Buell Anderson

I was looking over the final results of this article's AfD, and I didn't see anyone that explicitly had a problem with merging this into Endeavor Academy. I don't think it would be hard to put together a short, well-referenced article at Endeavor Academy that included all of the verifiable info here. I'll leave this open for discussion for a while, but if no one objects I'm going to be bold and merge it myself. --Nscheffey(T/C) 08:13, 11 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Be bold. The objection took the form of those who specifically voted to delete after a merge had been proposed. I haven't any objection to a merge at all. I do, on the other hand, have an objection to extremely thick conversations over umpteen individual issues that get bogged down into long talk pages which are difficult to traverse and lead toward a standstill rather than any consensus. If you think that we can discuss the newly merged article with that in mind, I would certainly appreciate it. Thanks. Ste4k 11:03, 11 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Antireconciler 20:58, 14 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
nice job. Ste4k 04:06, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup

This article needs to be factually verified, cleaned up in general after the recent merge. Ste4k 04:08, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Original Research

Will, I'm reverting your insertion because it is unsourced. A + B does not equal C. There isn't any mention of anyone at the Endeavor Website named Anderson. "Master Teacher", yes. Anderson? no. By the way, there isn't anything on that site, nor in the articles about anyone writing a book. Ste4k 07:58, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

There are numerous references to the fact that the head of the Endeavor Academy is called the "master teacher", and many references to Anderson as the master teacher. If it isn't him, then who do you think runs the place? -Will Beback 17:14, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Exactly, A + B does not equal C. It is not up to me to think who runs the place. That is original research. Comparing two different sources for making that assumption is synthesis. About your recent addition, using the source "Sects on the beach". Do you have that resource handy? I do. Here is what is added to the article: "advertises branch centers in Germany, Spain and Columbia. A former residential community in Byron Bay, Australia, however, has closed after facing many legal and financial difficulties." and cited to "Sects on the beach". There isn't any of the words "advertise" or "advertises" anywhere in that article, not even the prefix "adver". There isn't any mention of either Germany, Spain, nor Columbia in that article either. So that leaves us with: "A former residential community in Byron Bay, Australia, however, has closed after facing many legal and financial difficulties." The only mention of any "residence" pertains only to Byron Bay, Austrailia, and here is the quote:
"Business at the Miracle Centre would seem to be booming. 
The church is exercising its option to buy the adjoining Epicentre complex, a 
Byron landmark, and has a development application lodged with the local council 
for a 40-room motel for the site. If approved, Poppe 
intends handing the project over to a developer and using the proceeds to 
dramatically improve the church and its facilities. His 
devoted supporters insist much good has been accomplished under him, so much so 
that a number of acolytes have moved into the compound behind the church or 
taken up residence in nearby units on the Belongil Spit."
... also notice that there isn't any mention of Anderson there. None of the information in the predicate of that statement can be included citing the resource "Sects on the beach". Ste4k 20:03, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Let's break this down. Do you deny that the leader of the Endeavor Academy is the "master teacher"? -Will Beback 20:10, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Second, if Anderson is not connected to the academy then why did we merge his biography? -Will Beback 20:29, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Leadership

About this section and its references:

Endeavor Academy is headed by its primary teacher and founder, Charles Buell Anderson. He is referred to by his students as "Master Teacher," and writes and publishes books under this name.

  • Endeavor Academy. "Meet The Master Teacher". Retrieved 2006-07-15.
  • FACTNet. "A comparison of FACTNet's criteria with Endeavor Academy". Retrieved 2006-07-15.

There isn't any mention of either authoring or books in either of these sources. The first source (primary) mentions nothing about students referring to anyone. In itself, its claims are very POV, a little far fetched, i.e. as reliable resources coming from a primary source speaking about itself, they are both contentious and self-serving or self-aggrandizing. There is no mention whatsover in the first reference of anyone named "Anderson", nor is there any mention that "Master Teacher" founded and/or heads the Academy. For all we know, it could be run by a board of directors and sell private shares of stock. The second source never mentions anyone named Anderson either. The most it says directly is: "Master Teacher is the supreme authority, nobody in the cult can question his apparently divine wisdom." It also says, "Not only does the Master Teacher claim he is Jesus but he require constant attention to be focused on him." The statement is as far-fetched as the other statement is self-aggrandizing. I doubt that anything in this reference meets WP:LIBEL, or WP:NPOV, but if you want to add it back in, then according to the guidelines you should be very careful to quote the source, exactly, to avoid having WP be considered a primary source of its own, and you yourself take full liability in the case that you do not quote it directly. See Wikipedia:No libel "Avoid paraphrases or inexact quotes or relying on memory when making contentious observations or assertions - and be ready to provide sources or withdraw comments if challenged" Ste4k 20:33, 15 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]