User talk:Hatchens

Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University

Institute of Tropical Medicine, Nagasaki University Added source, please move to main page — Preceding unsigned comment added by TOKYO2021 (talk • contribs)

Participate in the discussion

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:2021_Uttarakhand_flood#Page_name A discussion was already started before you created the similiar article. Please tell your opinion there. Regards

Draft:Vector Risk Management

Hi, you recently tagged my article for a speedy deletion, and I have understood why. I have changed the parts where you may think is disturbing, and I was hoping if you could check it out again. Thanks.

News1India Hindi News Channel

Hi,

I am trying to create a page for Draft:News1India, but it declined by you. This news channel in India. This is not any type of advrt. I am not understud that why this submission declined. I collect all information from Indian news channels. I am not connected to News1India. Can you help me to resolve all issus?

OFRA Cosmetics

Hi Hatchens! I saw your comment on my article denial, and I'm a little confused. I worked with a reviewer yesterday, and he helped me find super credible sources and said nothing about my tone. My goal here is to spread awareness about animal rights and cruelty-free beauty. I have another article draft I'm working on as well for an animal charity organization, Mardi Paws. Can you help me understand how I need to change my article and get it approved?

Draft:Rolf Engen

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

Thank you for taking a look at my Draft. I have made several changes over the last month or so in order to continue to formalize the tone and to make additional changes recommended by a previous reviewer (I have been working on this for a while now). I just made some additional changes as well just now. Are there any more areas that to your eye clearly need improvement? I'm having some trouble continuing to find ways to neutralize/flatten the tone (this is my first Wikipedia article, so please forgive my amateurism!). Thank you for your help - I'm looking forward to finishing this one up so I can start on my next one.

Good afternoon, Hatchens,

I went ahead and made numerous, additional changes to the draft. It is substantially more factually-driven and more neutral in tone now - thank you for your help.

Mohammed bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development (MBRCLD)

Hi Hatchens,

I recently uploaded an article under for the Mohammaed Bin Rashid Centre for Leadership Development and I have noticed that it has gotten rejected within less than an hour. I have reviewed the article and I see nothing but facts in it, much like any other page about a learning centre or training institute. May I know why it was rejected and what I can do to improve it?

Draft: Arunabha Ghosh

Please let me know what needs to be changed. I have removed a lot of the language which sounded 'like an advertisement', but the submission was still rejected (for the third time). All of the statements made have citations and legitimate references. Not making any exaggerated claims or anything.

Draft:Manindra_Kumar_Roy

Hi Hatchens,

Thank you for taking time to look at my draft and leaving a comment on the page (Comment: VCs are generally considered notable. But, that doesn't mean puffery is allowed. Kindly redraft it, and submit it for a review.). According to the criteria for notable academics, I believe I article should qualify. I made a lot of edits and provided secondary sources that are independent of the subject in the article. It got declined few times and now I am not sure what is the reason. Are secondary sources in Bengali language are the issue or the writing style of the article? I would really appreciate any advise from you that would help. Thank you very much.--— Preceding unsigned comment added by Maximroy (talk • contribs) done by TTP1233 (talk · contribs).

Draft:Jakir Hossain (politician)

Please check it as possible and mark it stub.Jyoti Roy (talk) 13:47, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Link is Draft:Jakir Hossain (politician) Jyoti Roy (talk) 13:47, 12 October 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for reaching out. For assessing any politician's page - for approval purpose, just make sure about a verified mention (with credible/independent references) of their winning a state-level or a federal-level election. -Hatchens (talk) 03:59, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

Draft:Nima Bank

Hello Hatchens. I have recently made significant changes to this draft and have included new and reliable citations to further clarify the subject. Can I ask for a review of thee article? or for the rejection to be dropped? Can you make me understand the process? Thank you for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rooz1370 (talk • contribs) 13:47, 18 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, again Hatchens. I know you must be busy and I understand that, but I would love your great input on this matter so I could start working on the article again. Your input would mean the world to me thank you. Rooz1370 (talk

Request on 13:27:13, 19 October 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Anderson1970

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  • Draft:The Bengal Club (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

Hello, this is regarding the comments on my recent entry. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:The_Bengal_Club As I am new to Wikipedia and the editor's comments appeared to be rather broad, I am writing to request specific guidance in what needs change in what section. I would appreciate any assistance. Thank you.

Introductory paragraph:

- Does the editor wish each and every description of the subject institution by the press to be removed, or only some? Alternatively, should the descriptions simply be summarised in two or three words and the relevant press articles be footnoted? In other words, is the problem one of verbosity or verisimilitude? - Does the editor wish the quote by the well-known columnist and the well-known novelist, describing their respective perceptions of the subject institution, to be removed?

History: - Does the editor wish the names and backgrounds of important historical figures who headed the subject institution to be deleted? - In the section on 21st century history, does the editor wish all references to essays by prominent scholars and writers, describing their respective perceptions of the subject, to be removed? Or, should the perceptions be summarised in two or three words and the essays footnoted? - Does the editor wish the details of historical discrimination in the subject institution, and statements by famous historical figures on the same, to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the details of the architectural history of the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable visitors: - Does the editor wish the name of any historical figure who visited the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos of the historical figures (which are stock images on Wikimedia) to be deleted?

Notable speakers: - Does the editor wish the name of any important speaker to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the photos of two well-known personalities speaking at the subject institution to be deleted?

Notable events: - Does the editor wish the mention of any event held at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted?

Facilities: - Does the editor wish the mention of any facility at the subject institution to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the quotes from the press to be deleted? Or, perhaps summarised and footnoted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Cuisine: - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted, including the portions of potential historical significance? - Does the editor wish the favourable reviews by the press/scholars/experts to be deleted? Or, alternatively, summarised in a line or two and footnoted?

Art and artefacts: - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Literary references: - Does the editor wish for any specific mention of a writer or book to be deleted? - Does the editor wish for any of the photos to be deleted? - Does the editor wish the entire section to be deleted?

Thank you.

Request on 13:27:13, 19 October 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by Anderson1970

Adding to my last message, I made some changes. Do you think the editor can consider this version? Thank you. Anderson1970 (talk) 15:40, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

Anderson1970 (talk) 13:27, 19 October 2021 (UTC)

Reminder

Hi Hatchens. I am reading Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Stalwart Esports (2nd nomination) with an eye to possibly closing it. In that discussion I noted that you accused another editor of duplicity and spread a disagreement from one place (a DRV discussion) to a new place (an AfD discussion). If an editor is indeed being duplicitous that is a serious issue and should be dealt with at an appropriate conduct forum, such as ANI. I know these comments are a month ago but since they are new to me and do not appear to have been commented on at the time I am reminding you now. Barkeep49 (talk) 19:36, 21 October 2021 (UTC)

Dear Barkeep49, thank you for reaching out. It has been a long time since we communicated. I hope and wish everything is fine at your end. I'm replying to your message after the AfD discussion has been closed (with Result: KEEP). I nominated Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Stalwart_Esports_(2nd_nomination) and put forward my reasons. But, the way I and others got hounded - we surrendered (especially me). There was a similar situation Wikipedia:Articles_for_deletion/Luca_Soccer_Club_(2nd_nomination), but, there also I have been hounded by the same editor - despite clearly stating my neutral intent. It's the same page where the duplicity in the argument was noticed when compared with Stalwart Esports - but I was not confident to give a fight to it as the second nomination (renomination of Luca Soccer Club) was against the Wiki rules as the page had just passed through an AfD a month ago. I guess; we were close enough to catch up a ring of seasoned Wiki IDs who are involved in passing substandard articles into the main article namespace but somewhere we botched up the whole case, and even if they get deleted - they know how to bring them back via DRV (as it happened in the case of Luca Soccer Club). In the current state, I don't know how we can take this forward to ANI (because of a lack of Wiki skills at my end). Technically speaking, these IDs are far well prepared than us. Nevertheless, I would like to thank DGG, Sandstein, and Usedtobecool for bringing the best points into the discussion that will prepare a novice like me for future AfD nominations and discussions. -Hatchens (talk) 03:36, 22 October 2021 (UTC)