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This article is incredibly tonally inconsistent, especially in the image captions. I am not knowledgeable enough on the environmental impact of bowfishing enough to have a stance on it, but I can't imagine it's bad enough to say that "one night of bowfishing resulted in over 2,500 lifeyears taken". That seems overly malicious. Voynich42 (talk) 14:25, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Also, it seems misleading to call the species "vulnerable" in the first sentence, when that clashes with the IUCN rating while using the same terminology as that scale. Voynich42 (talk) 14:32, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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 [[User:Voynich42|Voynich42]] ([[User talk:Voynich42|talk]]) 14:25, 14 December 2021 (UTC)
-     Also, it seems misleading to call the species "vulnerable" in the first sentence, when that clashes with the IUCN rating while using the same      terminology as that scale.
+Also, it seems misleading to call the species "vulnerable" in the first sentence, when that clashes with the IUCN rating while using the same      terminology as that scale.
 [[User:Voynich42|Voynich42]] ([[User talk:Voynich42|talk]]) 14:32, 14 December 2021 (UTC)