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:Thank you kindly for your comment, I updated the article with the suggested modification. [[User:Sonny.fr|Sonny.fr]] ([[User talk:Sonny.fr|talk]]) 14:00, 14 May 2022 (UTC) |
:Thank you kindly for your comment, I updated the article with the suggested modification. [[User:Sonny.fr|Sonny.fr]] ([[User talk:Sonny.fr|talk]]) 14:00, 14 May 2022 (UTC) |
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I removed the section on the Italian contingent as it was a copy and paste of the inistry of defence page (plagiarism) and too technical and detailed for an encyclopedia. Regarding agreements - again I think having a list of agreements is too much detail for an encyclopedia page (but I haven't removed them - let's discuss on Monday). But it is problematic also because the reference (no.1) for the agreements doesn't take to the actual documents - so no sources cited.--[[User:Calfux22|Calfux22]] ([[User talk:Calfux22|talk]]) 14:43, 27 May 2022 (UTC) |
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@Sonny.fr, Thebass99, and Talpa99: please remove the bold stile in the content of the article. Just use the bold in the first word (words) which is the title of the article. Thank you --Ignazio Ligotti (Unipd) (talk) 13:38, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you kindly for your comment, I updated the article with the suggested modification. Sonny.fr (talk) 14:00, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
I removed the section on the Italian contingent as it was a copy and paste of the inistry of defence page (plagiarism) and too technical and detailed for an encyclopedia. Regarding agreements - again I think having a list of agreements is too much detail for an encyclopedia page (but I haven't removed them - let's discuss on Monday). But it is problematic also because the reference (no.1) for the agreements doesn't take to the actual documents - so no sources cited.--Calfux22 (talk) 14:43, 27 May 2022 (UTC)